Reviews for Roomies
Caterpillar-Drag-Queen chapter 1 . 12/26/2008
This was pretty cute and funny. It has a strange feel like you were writing every sentance as soon as it came to your head, but that makes the story good.

I'm not good at feedback...
pandorka42 chapter 1 . 11/25/2008
Hahahaha. Love it! It's the kind of poetry I like best: it tells a story! Good job - this was totally worth ignoring your class. xD
VelvetyCheerio chapter 1 . 11/4/2008
I had to read it and that last sentence was so funny. Oh, leah is mean, but I suppose that is payback. It was good, I loved it.

You know who I am! Lots of love.:)
LEDlorien7 chapter 1 . 10/27/2008
So, it's you and Leah against Ash and Em? DId you want that to come across in the first three lines? Because when you said "it's us against them" I thought you meant you and your roomies against the world. But anyway, it's actually kind of humorous. I hope you intended it that way, because I found it funny. *smiles* I like the last line. Excellent ending. Very sharp. Definitely a good, lighthearted poem!