This was pretty cute and funny. It has a strange feel like you were writing every sentance as soon as it came to your head, but that makes the story good.

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Hahahaha. Love it! It's the kind of poetry I like best: it tells a story! Good job - this was totally worth ignoring your class. xD

I had to read it and that last sentence was so funny. Oh, leah is mean, but I suppose that is payback. It was good, I loved it.

You know who I am! Lots of love.:)

So, it's you and Leah against Ash and Em? DId you want that to come across in the first three lines? Because when you said "it's us against them" I thought you meant you and your roomies against the world. But anyway, it's actually kind of humorous. I hope you intended it that way, because I found it funny. *smiles* I like the last line. Excellent ending. Very sharp. Definitely a good, lighthearted poem!