|Reviews for Annihilating the Fantasy|
| Link Broken chapter 1 . 1/18/2009
okay this was interesting. I would definately suggest to revise this. for example:
Warning: Do not miss with her (makes it sound like when you shoot her, DONT MISS! like i got it was "mess" but still, it was funny)
I like the last person the best.
I know this was a total typo, but it was hysterical! escpecially since you repeated it 3 times!
This was really good. I didn't actually realize that the person was reading files that people filled out themselves till the end (silly me) but it was awesome
| Soulzityr chapter 1 . 11/11/2008
The story itself seems to be very interesting, but no offense the poor grammar and structure sort of turns me off.
| MagicWords chapter 1 . 11/11/2008
Haha! I loved this! TThe first chapter and the folder descriptions rocked!
Echoo Rules cracked me up!
However, indent everytime a new person speaks to keep everything orderly.