Reviews for Eyes
Anise Cary chapter 1 . 2/1/2010
Amazing, this poem has so much emotion and in so few words. I have a feeling anyone who reads it will interpret it differently as well, it will become personal to each reader. I see this person fighting, fighting grief, fighting anger with the on who died and took that secret with them, and fighting life. wonderful job
Lee Daniel chapter 1 . 1/26/2010
This is so powerful that I do not even know if words can properly express what this meant to me. It made me think of the one I leaned on so much and the pain I felt when he died. My eyes filled with tears of memory as I read it.
writes between the lines chapter 1 . 10/27/2008
Very interesting, you definitely managed to capture my attention right away. Its very mysterious, but you can feel the emotion of the narrator, which is what I'm most interested in, and not necessarily the secret. Lovely, my very favorite line is "You took a secret with you beneath the soil/Leaving me lost in this crumbling world". Absolutely fantastic!