Hey! Your story is cool, but are you gonna update soon? Cause i wanna find out what happens P

So. Hanna's in love with Rys and hates Loa BECAUSE of that. And did Loa get selective amnesia or something when she was younger? Cause everyone ELSE seems to know Tommy. I'M SO CONFUSED! You must write quickly so I can understand.

This story just keeps on getting funnier and more exciting! That whole stare down between Tommy and Rys was...epic! I was over here like "Oh my garnit...oh my garnit..."... Pure epicness (Yes, its a word now :D)...

Holly... she got on my nerves. That part was very well done. I wanted to punch her so bad! :D

I can't really pick out anything that was bad...

A fan already and I can't wait for more.

-Valerie

Butbutbut. This is a lot better but. Rhys! If she ends up with Tommy how will Rhys feel? Cause I actually like him as her boyfriend unlike with most stories. But then Tommy is the new asshole boy who comes and steals the girl away. THIS STORY IS SO CONFUSING!

Good story, Tommy getting on my nerves though. I suspect he is supposed to though. Have on your trip!

I love this story! I really hope that Tommy and Loa will get together in the end though. They'd be so cute together :D

I loved your writing in the previous one and I'm glad you decided to remake the story. Personally, this is one of my favs. I'm also glad that you decided to change "Boo" to "Tommy". Although it doesn't make for a very good title, it is definitely a better name. The only thing I'd change is the mother...I loved her airheadedness in the previous one, but I think now she's a little over the top-maybe you should tone it down a bit? Good job and update soon plz!

Well, I've never read the old version, but I do really like this. I love Loa's personality and her family's really amusing. I can't wait to find out more about this boy so I look foward to an update! :)

dude this is one of the best stories ive read in a while. please update cause its really interesting and i like this version better than the old one no offense

I personally like this version much more than the previous one. The other progressed rather quickly in the first chapter, though I did find myself liking the story.

I like the descriptions you've added in this version. And though, yes, it is shorter than LAB1's first chapter, longer is not always better. Cliffhangers are good, despite what some eager readers may think. They keep you coming back for more.

The detail you add here makes up for the shorter length, and if you put this much detail into the rest of the story (if your muse cooperates and you are able to get it to go in the direction you want), LAB2 should turn out well. I'm looking forward to seeing more, and will be keeping an eye out. Ta!

Yeah, this beginning is much beter than the other one. Are you planning on rewriting the whole thing with more details? Although it might take a while, I think it will make your story a lot easier to understand and more interesting.