Jordan is NOT dead! I WON'T allow it! Damnit! You better bring him back!

Oh my God, that's so sad! I'm almost crying! T-T Please let Jordan be okay! Even if he was in the middle of the explosion... Ack, no! Please update soon! T-T

NO NO NO NO NO jordan has to come back or what happens to the story its about jordan and ray hes has to come bak plz plz plz update asap

Please tell me he didn't die. Oh my god, that's horrible. Great chapter. Update SOON!

I just wanted to let you know that this story is amazing and the latest chapter is the best yet. Please update soon!

Oh my God! *faints*

HEYHEY Hey! I realy don't think he's dead! I really really don't think so~ (sorry, that's really me)

but... Ray was soo naughty at the dinner. that made me laugh, lol!

For some reason, I really want Jordan to get with Dale. He obviously isn't dead so my guess is that Dale shot something else in the room to fool Leo who is his boss and then kidnapped Jordan. This story is a lot of fun.

No, No , No! -collapse in a pile of crying limbs-

Jorrdann!

please update sooN!

No! Jordan! T-T And after they got together and stuffs! Oh, I hope he's okay :( Evil Dale *scowls* I have a feeling Leo may have had something to do with that... May be way off, but whatever, ha ha. I don't like him, because Jordan doesn't :)

That pool scene was great by the way! :D Thank you for another amazing chapter! _ Please keep up the good work :D

Oh my god? No! Please don't leave us in misery, update soon?

Oh. I love it. Can't wait for more. I'm troubled by how Ray has changed, tho...

I wanna know more about Dale!

I read all of this in one sitting! I love it! Ray is such a hottie xD Please update as soon and you can...I'm also really interested in that grey eyed hitman D

oh~ cool is the only word i can say after reading this! I really look forwards to the next chapter!

Narq

I don't trust Leo. Maybe he is in a league with Dale? Thanks for the update!