Something I really forget in my review was that Dale really dissappear without a trace but you said you have intentions to continue it so that is good.

I really like this story I need to say that Ray was my favorite character he was really sexy too and loyal and he really loved is an enigmatic character for me though he says that he loves ray but cheats on him with Dale that is not love,but it was really good and maybe he love ray in its own way.

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Ending may be a little cheesy, but i left me smiling anfd happy :) Good job! Love your writing.

I love it, just what I was craving! Romantic, drama filled, mafia/mob goodness, and best of all cheesy at the end.

Its a horribly long time since you wrote this, but I hope you will continue writing because this is amazing. I really love the story but I love Dale especially so if you get the chance to write the Dale-centric sequel... that'd be great! :D
Cheesy end? Oh yes! But it was still a really good read. Great writing! :)

I will TOTALLY be interested in reading a Dale story. He's so much cooler than Ray. He needs a happy ending. And he kinda just disappeared in this one.

I want Jordan to hook up with Dale so bad. I don't like Ray.

Love this story! Thank you for writing it.

I love your story! :) and i really want to read the Dale story! please continue! :)

Hey, someone on Asian fanfics has copied your story and changed the characters..just so you know story/view/171934/1/love-sex-and-money-eunhae

I love this story so much! It's so sweet! :)

It's a shame that you haven't written more stories because you're good at it, really! And I would loved to read them!

What happened to writing more stories or a Dale sequel-ish thing? i spend all day reading this great story and excitedly read that Dale is going to have his own story only to find this is the only thing posted. Please write more, i love your writing style and wish you would write more.

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Would it be inappropriate for me to say I love you?

Cause seriously. Best story I've read on this site so far (though that's not saying much since I only just signed up but...)

Good job.

This by far is one of the best stories i have ever read on here. It's amazing! I can even overlook the few grammatical errors in each chapter, it's that good! Please post more stories soon!