Reviews for The PainGiver's Thoughts
Kalista Jia chapter 1 . 3/30/2009
I like how it flows

So that when they dissipate,

The stars glimmer all the more brightly

On the surface of your memories.

It is short but the message is delivered. Nice.
Unique1952 chapter 1 . 10/29/2008
I usually prefer pieces that are a little longer, but I think that the length coupled with your choice of words are very good here. Nice work with this piece.
The Exuberant chapter 1 . 10/29/2008
Hmm I thought it was good.

the last two lines were my favorite :)

oh and no need to review one of mine

im on a review spree :P
K. Molle chapter 1 . 10/28/2008
this almost sounds like a poem i've read before. Good flow and nice vocab choices.
Safi Kittykat chapter 1 . 10/28/2008
I dont expect a review back, but i wanted to say I really do like the last two lines! it sounds pretty... :)