|Reviews for roads|
| for shame chapter 1 . 3/4/2010
the way you write is twisting,
and it holds a strange sort of rhythm
that always seems to be changing.
i like it.
| tonight we bloom chapter 1 . 7/20/2009
wow, this is passionate and full of stunning imagery. i love it.
i would love opinions on my work from a talented writer like yourself, it would really mean a lot!
| young and the reckless chapter 1 . 3/28/2009
i especially loved the assonance of: "dip the tips of my fingers in the slips of your lips" ..it flowed so easily.