Reviews for slip
tonight we bloom chapter 1 . 7/20/2009
i love the use of simple words in this, it reflected the theme of your poem very nicely. great rhythm, great description, beautiful wording.

an excellent piece.
young and the reckless chapter 1 . 3/28/2009
i like the carefree nature of it. it's like during the perfect moments of a relationship, when everything's just bliss, and the world is all sunshine.