|Reviews for slip|
| tonight we bloom chapter 1 . 7/20/2009
i love the use of simple words in this, it reflected the theme of your poem very nicely. great rhythm, great description, beautiful wording.
an excellent piece.
| young and the reckless chapter 1 . 3/28/2009
i like the carefree nature of it. it's like during the perfect moments of a relationship, when everything's just bliss, and the world is all sunshine.