|Reviews for A Terrible Mistake|
| R.J.Warren chapter 1 . 10/30/2008
OMG! This is really good! Poor Dart, and what happened to Marion? Is there anymre to this or is it just kind of a one off thing? Well if it's a one off, I love how you've ended it because it leaves the reader desperate for more.
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Excellent job :D