Reviews for The Broken Moon Cries Silver Tears
Guest chapter 1 . 1/11/2013
BROKEN MOON
I remember when we first met and the way your eyes used to blend on me. The earth and the sky get together just like we were together on that special night. You know I used to compare our freindship like a full moon, because no matter what happens to the weather the moon never loses it's lights, but when I started to get to know you, you ignored me and so I felt lonley, and now everytime I take a peek at night all I ever see is a broken. I hope we can get together again, togther as one, together as two is all I want to make a full moon.

Hope you like.
SpyridonMoon chapter 1 . 10/31/2008
I really like this poem, you did a very good job with it. It sorta makes me want to go camping. XD
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 10/30/2008
"Cars horn in traffic,"... that line was awkward because cars don't horn, they honk

I did like the piece, your descriptions were really great. i especially liked the first line and line about green. I also like the way it looks visually, it's nice.
fatbird33 chapter 1 . 10/30/2008
fantabulous descriptions!