Reviews for The Orderly
zagato chapter 1 . 1/22/2009
Thank you for writing this story about Death!
alanavawn chapter 1 . 1/13/2009
I really get this story. You seem to know what it's like to give up a child. I've given up my son and it was the hardest thing to do. I know he's alive but I don't see him, he's adopted because I couldn't give him a good life. I don't know what it feels like to give up a child to death and the grave. good story that's all i can say. and good naming, didn't know that about Todd.
sgwx chapter 1 . 11/21/2008
Chillingly brilliant. I'm loving all your works!
Blazinfox555 chapter 1 . 11/4/2008
That one was really good. It wasn't as depressing as I thought it would be. I like the note you put at the end saying that Todd meant death in German. I like it even though it doesn't have any vampires. Keep up the good work!
Dream in Darkness chapter 1 . 10/30/2008
This story is sad, I was hopeing the little girl would survive. I don't know what I'd do if I lost a love one. Anyways, great beginning, update soon.