|Reviews for Gather (Version 1)|
| TeamComrade11 chapter 25 . 3/20/2013
Why is the name of this story Gather?
| TeamComrade11 chapter 26 . 3/20/2013
Great story! Sequel? ):
| Alaeryel chapter 26 . 2/10/2013
I loved the story immensely altho I felt like the ending was alittle to abrupt but not bad. I definitely see where you could make more of this in a sequel if you wanted but it was a very interesting one. It also was written very well yet some minor misspellings and wrong words used and a minute amount of tense errors but all in all you have a great story here!
| Alaeryel chapter 5 . 2/9/2013
So that is how she became a werewolf. I also have a feeling there is something up with Mr. Nolan but I will have to wait and see.
| Alaeryel chapter 4 . 2/9/2013
I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter Keelin!
| Alaeryel chapter 3 . 2/9/2013
Oh this chapter was absolute perfection Keelin-this had me chuckling and smirking clear to the end-especially-'I gotta go catch something' damn brilliant!
| Alaeryel chapter 2 . 2/9/2013
Ok Kristen is a werewolf and apparently something has happened in her past-I got that. But what I am trying to figure out is this-are her parents one too? Or is that something that has happened in her past-she was bitten or something that turned her into one? Very good story here Keelin.
| Alaeryel chapter 1 . 2/9/2013
I really enjoyed this chapter altho one thing is already for sure-I DO NOT LIKE Channing!
| dreeming chapter 26 . 7/28/2012
Oh gosh, I am so hooked to this.
| MEE chapter 26 . 7/11/2012
This is an awesome story! I hope you make a sequel if there isn't already one. I love how sweet Avery and Kristen are and everything is just on suspense and even cute at times! This is seriously one of the BEST stories I've read on here. No offense other authors, but usually supernatural isn't my type but this story was just AWESOME! Epic, and every other amazing word could be used to describe this story!
| The Imagination Addict chapter 26 . 11/20/2011
i like the ending :) i can see them freezing mid-run, like a tableau. movie-style.
i have to say though, the whole story seems slightly disjointed. i feel like you dont have a consistent theme. you seem to keep jumping from issue to issue. avery also seems a little inconsistent, like his behaviour changed depending on your mood when you wrote. sometimes he's this playful boy, and other times he seems like he's supposed to be an older werewolf and is secretive and mysterious. maybe you're trying to show that he's both, but it just seems like two different people.
but anyway, ive enjoyed this nonetheless. will there be a sequel? it seems like you're hinting at one since nolan hasnt been caught.
| The Imagination Addict chapter 22 . 11/20/2011
heeheehee im really loving this book. it's really addictive. the language is not bad. it's not spectacular, but it's good. :) the plot is gripping and... i cant stop reading! xD
| The Imagination Addict chapter 3 . 11/19/2011
ooh avery's interesting. she runs, he catches...
| Creatures chapter 26 . 7/9/2011
Loved the story :D it was pretty awesome!
| sweetpea265 chapter 3 . 6/12/2011
I like this story. Pretty interesting plot so far. Wish we knew a little bit more of how she came to be a werewolf though. I didn't really skim through much of this chapter. I was kind of glad to get to know all the characters a little more. I think the only part I didn't really like was the part with Channing, though that could be because I don't really like her and the conversation is pretty much about nothing. I did read it though, and the cliffhanger does make me want to read the next chapter. I liked it. It showed a little humor which is always a good thing to me.