Nice story! I really think that you have a good description!

~AC

wow...that part wit the eyes rely freeked me out...nice story tho!

Wow...spooky.

More seriously, it's interesting. And you write well. I've read some stories that are interesting but written by authors I can't stand, like the Banned and the Banished. The story itself is great, but I hate the author's style.

So this is a rare piece of work... How did you get the idea?

Wow, that a shiver down my spine. Awesome! Amazing story!