|Reviews for Insignia Swords|
| CieloPanda chapter 2 . 11/1/2008
Must have been a pretty large coffin, if she could move around so much. Or it was right against the window.
Shame the prince had such a brief cameo.
| robertrehcra chapter 1 . 10/31/2008
I have to say I liked it. The begging started a little to descriptive. When I re-read it it sounded fine( extremely good actually )but with the combination of gods(not a fan of Creek mythology style fantasy)and high level descriptions I wanted to quite reading.
errors?- The crow's caw was shortly after overwhelmed.
Needs commas? or combine the next sentence I don't know could just be me.
In truth I really like your writing style. Great Start.