Reviews for A Story of Treason
EnchantedUnicorn chapter 5 . 10/22/2014
Very interesting. I would like to see what happens on their mission.
acriter chapter 5 . 11/1/2008
A good start to the story, some of the dialogue between the two girls was a little stiff at times. Perhaps it will develop as the characters come to life. Also bits of the descriptions sometimes felt forced "And it compliments your red locks and hazel eyes.” Would a character actually say that if you didn't want to describe their friend. But I do like the ideal of the Colossal Descend. It's clever. Keep updating!