Jude's beggining to remind me of Col. O'neil from Stargate SG-1.

Wiley's Daniel! Or is he Carter?

Hiya! I'm only on chapter eleven, but I already love this story. I've been drifting about the net for weeks looking for a good story to read, I find them here and there, but nothing really long or fulfilling. This one, though, has got me very excited :D I'm having fun reading it!

It reminds me of Angel or Buffy, 'cept with boys kissing other boys, and it's a great combination, I have to say. I think you're one of my new favorites!

Also, like I said, I'm only on chapter eleven, but for this story's playlist I've been listening to the Spring Awakening soundtrack while reading, and I found "The Bitch of Living" "All That's Known" "Mama Who Bore Me (Reprise)", "Tottaly Fucked", "Whispering" and "Those You've Known." to sync up with this story here and there to great affect!

Keep writing, ma'am! I'll be doomed to wander the net forever wondering how the story ends if it's not ever finished~

I know I'm very late with the review, sorry 'bout that. The first thing I want to note is that pretty much the exact moment I thought "Huh, I'd love if we checked in on some of the other liberated demon kids to see where their lives are heading" you in fact did exactly that, so that was awesome.

I would also like to offer the opinion that Wiley rocks so damn hard and needs a hug.

More seriously, I love how you're conveying the changing relationship between Jude and Darcy and using it to show how Jude's character is changing as well...while still staying very true to what I think are the essentials of his personality. He relates so differently to Wiley now, for example...he's a very dynamic character.

Other things I love: that Jude's awareness of his own magical ability went from "oh. Huh." to "...dude, mine is lame compared to everyone else's!"; Alex's snarky dialogue; Wiley too tired to live in the present (and what was Jude's invasive personal question?); Jude finally working through some of his feelings about Ion; Mikey in all his eccentric glory.

Love this story, as always. Will try to be more on the ball with reviewing. _

Darcy equals cute.

OH GODS! WHAT WAS THE QUESTION?

also

Love

Oh my goodness. How much do I love this story? A lot. We'll leave it at that.

So, I definitely read all this in the span of a day because I couldn't...put it down. Or the computer equivalent of that. Whatever. But yeah. I would get all anxious whenever I had to leave the computer to go eat or anything. Okay, maybe not anxious, but I was internally screaming, "I WANT TO GET BACK TO MY COMPUTER NOW MMKAY?"

But I'm rambling at this point.

Okay. So. You managed to take the "secret government organization frot eh protection of the general populace" trope and make it original again! Way to go! The whole 'world' is really well fleshed-out and detailed. :D Everything's just really nicely done. Like it could be real.

The characters are excellent as well...Really 3D, not flat at all. Jude's a cynical bastard...but he's more than that! All the characters have facets and seem like they could be real people, even with their...interesting characteristics. Like not being able to see people. :D Love for Mikey.

Yeah, I have other things to type, like every little detail of the plot line that I absolutely adored, but then I'd keep YOU reading all day, so I'll just shut up here.

LOVE IT. :D Keep up the good work!

~RTA

This story is really good and Jude is quite adorable! I look forward to reading next chapters

Enjoying the story as always. I have just one wish:

Please do not, never ever, start your author's comments section by the words "This is the last chapter...". You almost gave me a heart attack!

hmm i do wonder how you're going to end this story, it's been quite fun really love every mintue of it, and oddly enough i don't expect a happy ending but some form of conclusion

i love the last quote you have in there. "small mute children: the best kind of therapy"

that was...um...interesting to know about Mikey...

my open house is this Sunday so that's when I'll be able to work on ion again.

ABird

aw cuddle-slut you can't not love Mikey!

Could Ion hear the talk between Jude and Mikey's mother? Jude's defensiveness over liking him. I like Ion he's this fierce creature with a need to be touched; Like Mikey with added aggression and claws.

and Darcy talked yay, wonder how much he does understand. He's slowely reaching out too.

yep lol, in some ways Jude has further to develop than Mikey.

Mikey and porn shakes head lol poor Mikey's mum can just picture 'the talk' though LMAO

JUDE RANTING TO CRAZY SEVEN-YEAR OLD.

I hope you pull this together well enough to finish. From your drabbles at the end it sounds like you are fairly aimless. It's a very good story, very creative characters, has a nice flow. I can only say positive things. When an author makes a character like Mikey, it makes me wonder about them just a little. I mean, what kind of person makes a Mikey-like character? Whatever you are doing, it's working out so keep up the good work.

darcy is made of awesome and freaky weird

*offers cookie for more*