Reviews for Hey Jude
Jennesifer chapter 5 . 11/3/2008
Wow. Great subject and portrayal. It's going really well so far - please continue! Can't wait until next update.

Poor Jude. Most Awesome POV In History Of Universe. And that's saying something, because I can't usually stand first person. But thanks to you my viewpoint has been SMASHED.

SMASHED BEYOND REPAIR.
Pat chapter 2 . 11/3/2008
am loving this! just, you change tenses alot, it's hard to keep up but whoas-wow and yay you! *reads on*
Tig chapter 5 . 11/3/2008
I really like your style and characterizations.

I hope to read more soon.

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DeletionImminent chapter 4 . 11/3/2008
Oh, cool. This is great- Mikey's character is pretty awesome, the style and the problem with noticing the existence of others is cute, and also faintly disturbing. Poor Finn. Good luck for nano- see you at the end of it!
peteyra chapter 3 . 11/2/2008
Oh, hey, I just noticed this!

He smiled nervously. “Just… climbing. I like to climb.”

It was the truth.

I don't know if I picked up on it the first read-through, but just that: It was the truth. It's a sneaky way of foreshadowing Jude's talent. I like it. You're ninja with the details like that. _

I still obscenely love the last paragraph; it is just too adorable. Actually, Ion and Jude together are just too adorable. Ah.
peteyra chapter 2 . 11/2/2008
*sings with Mikey*

Hey Jude, don't make it bad, take a sad song and make it beter~

He, I think there should be more of Finn. I like Finn.
peteyra chapter 1 . 10/31/2008
Mikey is my favouritest ever. EVER. Though Jude rocks like a rocking thing.

I am so excited for this story! ...which of course means if you try to get away with not finishing it, I will hunt. You. Down.
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