Reviews for Hey Jude |
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![]() ![]() Wow. Great subject and portrayal. It's going really well so far - please continue! Can't wait until next update. Poor Jude. Most Awesome POV In History Of Universe. And that's saying something, because I can't usually stand first person. But thanks to you my viewpoint has been SMASHED. SMASHED BEYOND REPAIR. |
![]() ![]() am loving this! just, you change tenses alot, it's hard to keep up but whoas-wow and yay you! *reads on* |
![]() ![]() I really like your style and characterizations. I hope to read more soon. _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, cool. This is great- Mikey's character is pretty awesome, the style and the problem with noticing the existence of others is cute, and also faintly disturbing. Poor Finn. Good luck for nano- see you at the end of it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, hey, I just noticed this! He smiled nervously. “Just… climbing. I like to climb.” It was the truth. I don't know if I picked up on it the first read-through, but just that: It was the truth. It's a sneaky way of foreshadowing Jude's talent. I like it. You're ninja with the details like that. _ I still obscenely love the last paragraph; it is just too adorable. Actually, Ion and Jude together are just too adorable. Ah. |
![]() ![]() ![]() *sings with Mikey* Hey Jude, don't make it bad, take a sad song and make it beter~ He, I think there should be more of Finn. I like Finn. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Mikey is my favouritest ever. EVER. Though Jude rocks like a rocking thing. I am so excited for this story! ...which of course means if you try to get away with not finishing it, I will hunt. You. Down. |