"I wasn't cut out for this who saviour of the masses business, I decided on my way to meet the others."

fix:

"I wasn't cut out for this whole savior of the masses business, I decided on my way to meet the others."

"I'd really only considered things on the level of 'how things out to be according to Jude'."

should be:

"I'd really only considered things on the level of 'how things ought to be according to Jude.'"

"I hadn't realised just how badly I'd needed to here that. My hand crept oh without my permission and tangled itself in the bottom of Ion's shirt, as though I needed to physically keep hold of him."

Should be:

"I hadn't realized just how badly I'd needed to hear that. My hand crept out without my permission and tangled itself in the bottom of Ion's shirt, as though I needed to physically keep hold of him.

"Miley sat on the floor in between me and Ion's legs. Bowing claimed his usual armchair."

The mpreg creation of Wiley and Mikey?

I'm just trying to help edit a little bit, please forgive me.

"When I woke up in a hospital bed with a pounding headache with my slightly bloodied T-shirt clutched to my chest as opposed to covering it, I was somewhat disconcerted."

Would read better as:

When I woke up in a hospital bed with a pounding headache and my slightly bloodied T-shirt clutched to my chest as opposed to covering it, I was somewhat disconcerted.

update! yay! i loove reading this . and hey whassup with the charie kid, there is something right there

Was it reaaally a werewolf? And I couldn't really remember what happened last chappy but I think I got most of this one though. And btw..16 year old blonde boys named Charlie? I have a Charlie and he's16 and blonde and gay. But is your Charlie going to make a second appearance or was he just there to be there? And yeahh... update soon, maybe?

w00t! thanks for the update!

I don't mind the delay, it happens to almost every author xD

I get emails when this story is updated and when my phone beeped saying a new chapter was uploaded, I literally dropped everything I was doing and went to read the chapter, just to show how much I love new chapters xD and this one was suuuper nice, love the car scene, it was really serene and really showcased their relationship and how Jude is learning to love it

Can't wait for the next chapter! :)

Wow. Just like, wow. Have you ever read the Darren Shan saga series? What I've read up to here was really unique and this chapter totally blew me away and had that creepy atmosphere like those novels did. I've always seen your story but kinda skimmed by it since it's had so many chapters haha but since I found out you were Potatoe from The Slash Pile I was like, damn I bet her stories are good. And I am SO glad I gave this a try! Definitely not what I was expecting, in the best possible way. I had been surfing the web all night so I didn't sleep and when I read your story it wholly completed my night (morning?). So like yeah haha, thanks! :D

Hello. I found this story a long time ago and forgot about it but now I'm really ecstatic that i found it again! You need to update, and soon! what happened to updating once a week? xD Anyways, I hope you update soon!

hello there :) i think this story is pretty much amazing and you are doing a wonderful job. it has been a pleasure to read and i hope it will continue to be so. i cant imagine the dedication and effort you must have poured into this but it definetly pays of, brilliant work

A schedule is enacted and then ignored. Quick!

Oh wow this story is great... UPDATE! i want to know what happens with the end of the world... and also if jude and ion ever ever do it... ;) but man i love this story... i really hope you dont take another one year break... lollz oh well... ANYWAYS... GREAT STORY! I LOVE IT!

I am answering your plea for reviews! I love your work, please continue! I can't wait to see how it ends...

I love Mikey, Ion, Alex, Darcy, Jude and oddly Finn... I feel bad for Finn, but his pain is hilarious...