Reviews for Hey Jude |
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![]() ![]() I have not laughed so hard in a very long time. Mikey fetching the spatulas was just a fantastic mental picture in which you wonder what they did with them to see it's affect on Finn. Mikey is seriously cute, no matter what he does ! Thank you for updating. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have to say, after having gone back and re-read this in it's entrirety (it's been very slow at work) that what makes this story stand out, and what makes it one of my all time favorites is the strength of your characters. They all have such depth, and interest that they make the plot and the story come to life. Mikey, for example, in another weaker story might be relegated to comic relief, or a lovely obeject sort of status, but for all his innocence he has this sense of humor, a depth of understanding, and such an interesting way of looking at the world As an older reader I appreciate just how much he cares, and how he uses his sense of humor and detachment to try to protect himself. Sorry for the novel length review, but take it as a reflection of just how much I have enjoyed reading this. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just love Ion and his pancake logic. |
![]() ![]() "Sal sat in front of him and the rest of us leant 'against the fall wall of the small room." 'against the far wall' maybe? |
![]() ![]() ![]() So happy! Thank you so much for the updates and all future updates (not that I'll stop reviewing). And yay! for Finn and Mikey. Now to move Ion and Jude along. Can't wait. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hooray for Mikey and Finn! But wtf did they do with those spatulas? Ok gonna be thinking about that all night now... |
![]() ![]() ![]() :) Oh jeez fins new kink is hilarious. I feel so bad for him. Now he fits in with all the weirdos. And the whole werewolf mission sounds pretty exciting. I'm so into all the action-y cool mission fighting stuff. ;) I also like the idea of ion and jude being alone in a cabin. A lot could happen. Weekly updates: Coolness |
![]() ![]() "Easting up here. They made pasta." Eating? |
![]() ![]() This one was really funny and cute with Jude flailing to go back to sleep, to Mikey thinking he's only half gay. Maybe he'll be tri-sexual, and try it all. Hee Hee. ;) Poor Jude and his sexual disfunctions. He should get professional help and speak with someone, because Ion is awesome and so patient; but it's cruel to keep him hanging for so long. Love your writing ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really liked it and can't wait for the next one. I'm so glad you got back into the swing of things with this story. I look forward to it every time you update. _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() So liking the pace you have set for Jude and Ions relationship. Things are progressing at a realistic rate. You are awesome! Now all I need to know is when will Mikey get to "see" Finn again? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ion and Jude have come to a lot of understandings these last few chappys. Makes me happy. But its cute that Mikey cant see Finn but he still interacts with him. I wish he could see him. Again. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yes! I leave a week for the holiday and I get three chapters ! And Ion and Jude are together! You are the best! They are so cute XD! Write more ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome chapter, once again. You never cease to entertain :) This was a good chapter to get their relationship ball rolling and I can't wait to see how Darcy reacted to his precious Jude getting molested lol |
![]() ![]() That's amazing you came up with a whole plot from dreaming up 3 characters. I'm happy the mother's doubts about the baby were eased by Jude, since he know the horror of her past and still has faith everything will turn out alright. He so underestimates himself and what he means to those around him. He's like Yoda and doesn't know it. So stoked he and Ion are doing the monogamous thing together. They are still young they have time for love to grow. Super chapter ! |