Awesome chapter, im so glad jude finally explained himself to ion! it was so frustrating before wen they had that misunderstanding and maybe now they can get closer to actually *being* with each other :) really can't wait for the next chapter!

Hi! Just so you know I like it when the chapters are a bit longer. Not SUPER long, but long-ish. Also I really liked this chapter. I especially liked the bit of conversation at the end. It made me laugh. I can't wait for the next part! _

Never mind Dragon Age 2 - We need updates!

Great as always :)

Oh... Wow. Sorry that's all I can make up now XD

I read this whole story up to this point in two sets! You completely got me hooked! I can't wait for you to continue. The story line is unique and you're keeping the space steady.. That takes some badass skill! And I love the way you describe the feelings of Jude and the switch to the 'working mode' is pretty realistic.

Anyways. I don't know if my comment made any sense, but the same in English: I love your story! It's so cool! I can't wait for the next uptade! :)

Yay, new chapter! I love it when I get an chapter alert :)

Jude is just so kick ass all the time, I like how he's so matter-of-fact about things and Maria is an interesting character though I'm waiting for a breakdown from her sometime in the future after she processes everything, if she stays a little longer as a side-character, no one can go through all that and still be as chill as she's being.

Can't wait for the next chapter!

What's up with updating at 1:00 in the morning? I couldn't read this chappy until I got out of school. And no fair btw. I tried to update yesterday and fictionpress was taking a nap in Ho-city. Whateverr. I hearted the chapter. Even though it was a bit on the eery side. Poor lady and her demon-ite baby... are they gonna cut it out of her and kill it or are they gonna let its demon-ite self live and be in their team like señor Ion?

Thanks for the update! I am curious as to what will happen next. _

More updates! Hurrah! Though I think however many you post, I'll always really really want more. But thanks, a lot, for posting! I loved the chapter. And I like how Jude acts in situations like this; he thinks he's not that good of a guy and then... well, he's just a good guy. He makes me happy. Anyway, again, thank you for posting, and update when you can!

Damn you and your twist. Leaving a pregnant lady hiding in the basement and making her prisoner to her brother. Hmm I really wanna know why he turned against them. Haha I just wanna say I feel quite clever for discovering this right around when you decided to start updating again. Lol

Shiv-ings, get your shiv-ings here!

Just kidding.

I really wish you would stop with the cliff hangers; they're annoying. It's like not being able to sneeze because the room's too bright.

At least that's my opinion. Also, Where did they park the car? By the farm house?

Hooray for updates! I like Max btw. I bet one day he's just gonna start talking and surprise the world. That would be awesomee. I miss Ion though. Him and Jude need to sit down and have "the talk" so Ion can be in more story scenes... and stuff.

You bad. You don't give us a Max cliffie. I gotta know what's behind the basement door. Lol. This was a really speedy update! btw congrats on your new baby rats!

Oh poor Finn and Mikey he can't see him anymore. They were so cute its to sad that Finn is invisible again. But its good that Mikey is trying hard to work on acknowledge Finn anyway. And Mr. Swirling Mist eyes whose name i can't recall does he ever freakin sleep? I mean really go to sleep! It's been days since he came to rest. He needs a girlfriend or someone to unwind with. Lol.

I go a few days without looking, and you churn out THREE chapters! :O Magic!

Poor, poor Jude. He needs a break to deal with his emotionally stunted self. A break that doesn't involve going into creepy places with crazy hobos and mutilated bodies, preferably. But, you know, it's whatever.

Still sincerely enjoying it. :) Keep up the excellent work!

The development of the plot in this chapter is great, and I can't wait to find out what they're up against in this situation. It looks to be interesting.