I decided that avoiding being stabbed to death is reason enough to stop being a silent Hey Jude stalker, and become a good little reviewer XD.

as i never reviewed before on this story I'll start saying I LOVE it. after re-reading it I decided it is probably one of the best plots on fiction press, and I love the characters, especially Jude and ion. an i love the slow progress of their relationship.

this last chapter reminds me of a movie i saw yesterday: The road, lots of shots of torn limb and gnawed bones...

pleasse please keep up the fast updating (so my stalking actually leads to finding an new update, instead of feeling sad cause there is no update to read)

Just discovered HJ yesterday and have blazed through all 78 chapters in two days (thank goodness I didn't have to wait the year between updates...though now I'm hooked and you have a new fan).

Review: I'm glad that you had Mikey acknowledge Finn's presence even though he couldn't see him any longer...it was a very touching scene. On a slightly different note, I for one love Ion and wish Jude would just get his act together in the romance department. Can't wait to see where you take this.

Short but undeniably awesome. And Mikey was in it which is a plus even though it was sadness-filled. Poor little Finn. Always getting the short end of the stick...

Awesome! And yes I was one of the ones who re-read this story, it's just too good. Ion and Jude seriously grow on you like a mutated fungus (in a good way lol). Now I can't wait for Ion and Jude to finally figure out what their relationship is cuz Ion totally took wat Jude said in the end the wrong way so that's gonna make an interesting conversations between them if they talk about it.

Can't wait for the next chapter!

TRICKERY! Making me think that Jude and Ion had gotten together and then Jude goes and opens his big ass mouth. WTF? Ugh whatevies. And where's Mikey? I miss his cuteness.

Lmfao I dunno how macs work but there has to be something to delete your naughty gay porn.

Hehe Jude is so hilarious. I was sitting here like almost Jude almost and Bam! You scared him away. Poor Ion you tease the crap outta him. I've gotta see Mikey try and role play while Finn is all tied up. That is just too much to

miss.

YOU'RE BACK ON

Yay! I was really super excited when I saw that you updated! I would have reviewed sooner...except that I have a terrible memory for detail and had to go read the whole thing again. WHICH IS OKAY. I read parts of it out loud to my room mate, who thinks you're a comic genius and wants to have Wiley's babies, by the way.

Actual review:

Poor Jude. He sure does get hurt a lot. Is it sadistic of me to enjoy the way he acts when he's lost a lot of blood? It is twisted that I think it's cute?

Also, I think that the pace you've had Jude and Ion's relationship progressing at counts as a form of torture in some countries.

And, lol. Terrorists hating art. Loved that line. :D

Anyway, awesome update, and thanks for reminding me of exactly why I love this so much. Can't wait to read more! But...uh...no rush. :P

-Rachel

Haha, I won't lie, it took me a bit to remember where HJ left off! But that is just a lovely excuse to read it over again... I was so exited to see it updated!

I know what's going on, just let me get some pants and I'll be happy to explain it all. *Reread this, twice.*

You are decidedly more awesome than I initially thought. I've been a member of your lj group the slash pile but I never realized you wrote any stories. I really really liked this story. I have a question though why oh why aren't they giving Jude more training. I love how rough and tough he is but I mean come on he gets injuries almost every single time he gets a mission and not just scratches or a broken arm. NO Jude has to be so dramatic and pass out. Lol. I dunno but seems to me with his second in command status he should have to get some more training so he can stop getting so injured he passes out. Lol. Btw I seriously love Darcy. He's just such a cute kid breaking into Jude's room cause of nightmares and such. I guess it's safe to assume his accident was attributed to his normal childhood development being hinder cause of being locked in a glass box. Mikey and Finn are too adorable together. Poor Finn though he never gets a moment alone and never mind that when he does get private bathroom time Mikey is outside his door begging him to hurry and come back. Probably more than just a little bit of pent up frustration. Lmfao. Can't wait for a new chapter.

To be honest, I think even if you didn't update for decades, I'd still check for updates-occasionally rereading, looking sadly but hopefully at the date in which is was last updated. Refreshing occasionally. And that feels kind of pathetic to type. But anyway, you updated! Yes! And it was great, and thank you very, very much for doing so. And there was even a bit of Jude and Ion! Together! Hurrah! Honestly, I kind of like the slow progression of their relationship. It feels more realistic than most, and the main plot is interesting enough that it doesn't have to have the jump-at-your-face-overwhelming romantic plot arc in it.

And I like that there's actually a character I can read who feels as awkward about romantic relationships as I do. Someone to empathize with! Yay!

But, back to the point. I love this story very, very much. And you just made my day. So, yes. Thank you. Update when you can!

Don't worry, we are still reading the story... Poor Ion and poor Jude, the relationship is difficult lol!

Write more!

YAY :D loved it *0* Ion HAS to rape Jude, it's the only situation I can see where they would do something else than kiss XD

Still reading! and still remember whats going on :) love this story