nice story

Awwww maaan, we do have oranges in Poland :D :D :D :D :D From export, but still, we know how to peel them.
I mean, it's hard sometimes, what with having to peel them with sharpened stones, but life's tough. But sometimes we even manage to hunt a boar with our spears and then cook it on fire, so at least there's that. :D :D :D

We even have computers, lol :P

oh my goD THAT WAS SO GOOD

I like this story ! :) thank you !

I bet Law's gay and has a crush on Alan, i guessed it since chap two but gonna love finding out if im right. love the story

Loved the updates.

You should post this on ao3, it would be nice to have a copy there, a nicer site to read stuff off of

Love, love, love this! You have a real talent for writing! Please don't say you've stopped writing! I miss seeing updates :)

This story is completely wonderful! You're a talented writer and I'm glad I came across this story :)

Congrats on finishing the re-write! :)

! This can't be it for their story!? I enjoyed this story immensely. Love your writing! :D

'gay things' I was about to say Alan, hunny, they probably don't have the same genders that you do... But I guess they do.
and 'aggressive dick' good god.
I'm just going to bet that Rysa won't react too fucking terribly, since she is Keyd's ultimate sister-friend, but maybe that is going to be a big plot point later?

My reaction to Alan and Keyd - FINALLY!
Quick question: will you be reposting chapters on your original Chioroscuro story, or will you create a new story for it? Just want to know so I make sure I follow the right thing!

Wait, why is this the last chapter?
But yes, I loved the story to bits, but could you tell me if that really was the end or if itz ib an actual published book somewhere?

I read this ages ago. Back in 2010. I'm here rereading it and love the changes. Looking forward to more.