|Reviews for Tenebrism|
| surrealdemon chapter 7 . 12/13/2008
Well, I've read a couple of your stories before and have always enjoyed them. I finally buckled down and decided to write a review for this one, since I really got into it towards the end, and I believe it deserves more than the 40 reviews it has.
I have one little critique/comment: In the first(?) chapter, you write about Keyd pulling the sword out of his face, but it is not described how (the whole tattoo thing)until later chapters. It's a bit confusing.
I'm happy to hear there will be more from this universe-you can definitely expand on it into future events or alternative character views. Congrats on the fast update schedule! You certainly are a talented writer, and I look forward to any future stories!
| samalane chapter 7 . 12/13/2008
Oh, I can't wait to read more! I love this plot- it's so interesting, and I can't even guess what's going to happen. And of course, i love Alan and Keyd, they're adorable together!
| Vera Dicere chapter 7 . 12/12/2008
wow. so, they just moved right along there, didn't they? but i can understand why, if they only had a short time together. i like the struggle and the emotion in this chapter. very real. and i like that alan's inner struggle mirrors keyd's to a lesser degree, so that he's able to empathize, but also be reassuring and comforting to keyd.
i'm still super intrigued by the whole premise of this with the symbiotes and the oenclar and clarbach. definitely looking forward to the next part! :)
| Revontulet Zvezda chapter 7 . 12/12/2008
nice chapter, it's good to see keyd hapier, and that rysa still loves and accepts him after realizing he's gay. i wish my family was like that. and about the sex scenes, you can read fanfiction, it'll definitely give you some very good ideas. or you could watch porn xD!
| Golfbabe87 chapter 7 . 12/12/2008
The chapter I believe many of us have been waiting for. Damn, poor Keyd. They practically kill you for being homosexual. That's harsh. But I guess it isn't so different in parts of the world here. I live in San Francisco, Ca, so I'm just used to seeing same sex couples holding hands etc. It's difficult for me to understand why some people just can't be at least tolerant. It was super difficult during election time in Ca b/c of prop eight. It's so sad seeing some of my friends so heartbroken over it. I hope you write more. But I understand you have written so much, so don't burn yourself permanently! Just promise you will be back ok? Take care and I can't wait to read more of your work!
| zoule chapter 7 . 12/12/2008
What a great way to end my day! I just finished my last final and come back to my suite and find an amazing update :) I don't mind if you pull a Stephenie. In fact, I love all of your writing.
| GrumpyFace chapter 6 . 12/8/2008
Ah, I love this story! It's completely and utterly amazing. I don't even care that the slash is a long time coming, this story's pace really suits it :D
| charm en route chapter 6 . 12/7/2008
Yay, I've really enjoyed this.
I'm mean, it's completely and utterly original, and that's hard to come by nowadays.
So, I hope you stick to your every Friday plan. :D
| Golfbabe87 chapter 6 . 12/7/2008
I like the pace you are moving with this. You are developing your characters very well, I feel so connected with them and their emotional states. I can't wait to read more!
| Golfbabe87 chapter 4 . 12/7/2008
oh no! poor Keyd! I hope he is ok, and his wing is gone!
| Golfbabe87 chapter 3 . 12/7/2008
I felt the drinking in the graveyard was pretty clear. Interesting on the dark and light concepts. The fight scene was rather well done.
| Golfbabe87 chapter 2 . 12/7/2008
This is super interesting! I love it! The frequency concept is great and I love how you have a strong female character woo hoo! Poor Alan, lol.
| sapere chapter 6 . 12/7/2008
Awesome chapter! Incoming slash, yay! I love Keyd and Alan :) Their awkwardness is great!
| Cattails chapter 6 . 12/7/2008
I'm completely hooked XD This story is insanely interesting...and suspenseful! I like the slow-moving slash...it creates more tension and is a lot of fun to read. The characters are awesome, too! I like all of them (even Ahieel! ...then again, I always like the villains...). So...yes. Love it!
| Revontulet Zvezda chapter 6 . 12/7/2008
Damn I just can't wait for the steamy stuff to happen; all that sexual tension is killing me Lolz xD! Anygays, this is such a freaking killer story, please update soon