|Reviews for Tenebrism|
| Vera Dicere chapter 7 . 12/12/2008
wow. so, they just moved right along there, didn't they? but i can understand why, if they only had a short time together. i like the struggle and the emotion in this chapter. very real. and i like that alan's inner struggle mirrors keyd's to a lesser degree, so that he's able to empathize, but also be reassuring and comforting to keyd.
i'm still super intrigued by the whole premise of this with the symbiotes and the oenclar and clarbach. definitely looking forward to the next part! :)
| Revontulet Zvezda chapter 7 . 12/12/2008
nice chapter, it's good to see keyd hapier, and that rysa still loves and accepts him after realizing he's gay. i wish my family was like that. and about the sex scenes, you can read fanfiction, it'll definitely give you some very good ideas. or you could watch porn xD!
| Golfbabe87 chapter 7 . 12/12/2008
The chapter I believe many of us have been waiting for. Damn, poor Keyd. They practically kill you for being homosexual. That's harsh. But I guess it isn't so different in parts of the world here. I live in San Francisco, Ca, so I'm just used to seeing same sex couples holding hands etc. It's difficult for me to understand why some people just can't be at least tolerant. It was super difficult during election time in Ca b/c of prop eight. It's so sad seeing some of my friends so heartbroken over it. I hope you write more. But I understand you have written so much, so don't burn yourself permanently! Just promise you will be back ok? Take care and I can't wait to read more of your work!
| zoule chapter 7 . 12/12/2008
What a great way to end my day! I just finished my last final and come back to my suite and find an amazing update :) I don't mind if you pull a Stephenie. In fact, I love all of your writing.
| GrumpyFace chapter 6 . 12/8/2008
Ah, I love this story! It's completely and utterly amazing. I don't even care that the slash is a long time coming, this story's pace really suits it :D
| charm en route chapter 6 . 12/7/2008
Yay, I've really enjoyed this.
I'm mean, it's completely and utterly original, and that's hard to come by nowadays.
So, I hope you stick to your every Friday plan. :D
| Golfbabe87 chapter 6 . 12/7/2008
I like the pace you are moving with this. You are developing your characters very well, I feel so connected with them and their emotional states. I can't wait to read more!
| Golfbabe87 chapter 4 . 12/7/2008
oh no! poor Keyd! I hope he is ok, and his wing is gone!
| Golfbabe87 chapter 3 . 12/7/2008
I felt the drinking in the graveyard was pretty clear. Interesting on the dark and light concepts. The fight scene was rather well done.
| Golfbabe87 chapter 2 . 12/7/2008
This is super interesting! I love it! The frequency concept is great and I love how you have a strong female character woo hoo! Poor Alan, lol.
| sapere chapter 6 . 12/7/2008
Awesome chapter! Incoming slash, yay! I love Keyd and Alan :) Their awkwardness is great!
| Cattails chapter 6 . 12/7/2008
I'm completely hooked XD This story is insanely interesting...and suspenseful! I like the slow-moving slash...it creates more tension and is a lot of fun to read. The characters are awesome, too! I like all of them (even Ahieel! ...then again, I always like the villains...). So...yes. Love it!
| Revontulet Zvezda chapter 6 . 12/7/2008
Damn I just can't wait for the steamy stuff to happen; all that sexual tension is killing me Lolz xD! Anygays, this is such a freaking killer story, please update soon
| zoule chapter 6 . 12/5/2008
Wonderful chapter. I am incredibly curious about his power :)
| Fei chapter 6 . 12/5/2008
I love the changes to Alan's abilities. I find it so hard to review this, because it feels like I'm reading a novel - a really polished, enthralling and really really well written novel, and all I desperately want to do is read the next chapter, because the pace is perfect, and the plot is just... unique, original and utterly amazing.