Oh yeah! Finally they're getting closer. But the sexual tension is killing me now! I love how Keyd is all protective bout to have a heart attack over Alan. It's awesome! Keep it up. ;)

Wonderful, super long and terrific chapter. Alan really is in a strange place, and it doesn't seem to be getting any better. Loved it! Yeah! Keyd is just so cute in a hulking big alien way.

I absolutely LOVE this story!

Please, please, please post another chapter soon.

I feel some tension between Law and Alan. I hope there is. Must know more about everything!

This was really freaking awesome. I love the character development and the originality of the plot. You really take time to develop your story, rather than having everything happen withing three chapters. I definitely need to see more of this, and I eagerly await you next update. Good work!

Oh my god that DREAM! Haha.
Really glad I found this story. Im diggin' it. You're an awesome writer, dude. :)

Looking forward to updates!

Loving the story so far. Kicking myself for starting another incomplete story because I much prefer reading marathons to pained waiting for updates. Alas.

Thank you for posting! I look forward to the next installments.

The new alien calls Alan by his name although Alan never tells him it.

This is super! I actually looked up how far a horse travels in an hour before continue reading further. It also made me laugh so hard I woke myself up before I needed to get out of bed.
I agree with Alan, A wet dream for sure! Can't wait to read more.

I really think I like this story a Lot. I just got really into it and it just got really interesting so why the hell did you just delete those chapters from the whole internet instead of just leaving them there until you did your update ? Honestly I really think no one would care if they are not from the same re-write your story is great but why just why did you do that as far as I can tell these might be the most important chapters of the whole series and I can't read them now and I almost smashed my phone cause I went to 2 other websites to find your story only to see that you did the same thing there you might think that's funny but I wasn't feeling good today and I finally found a great book to read and then after only 3 hours of reading a can't fucking continue and that's just plain torture and sorry if this sounds like I am rude but I really just want to consume and praise your work if you don't mind

I like your story very much so far. I love the idea and i totally get it and I also love the chracters but i am really fighting myself right now because i can't continue reading because the chapters that are missing from Light and Shadow 1 are nowhere to be found. I wanted to read your story because it sounded interesting and it wouldn't just stop after 3 hours of reading because you have already 4 books of it and i am really looking forward to those so if anyone is reading this: Please could you send me the link to where i can read those missing chapters? I googled for almost an hour now and i couldn't find anything and now i am really mad at you(author) but I also love you for writing this story but i can't just leave a story where i know that more chapters are on my frickin screen but i can't read them cause other chapters are missing and usually i don't write long reviews because my writing-english isn't that good but i really need your help because that's just not fair. It's not funny i feel really bad why couldn't you just leave the un-rewritten chapters on? People already read those and liked them it wouldn't hurt anybody but you just erased them from everywhere and hurt me. I know you aren't getting paid for this.. i just really want to enjoy your work!

all smiles i know this isnt a new story but im a first time reader so i do little happy dances when you update

Seeing this chapter up was the best thing that happened to me this month. This story is just awesome and every time I read it, it makes me happy. Thank you!

ugh weird read more later

So glad to see an update. Wonder if we'll ever find out the intricacies of ahieel and rysa. Also, I will always vote for more alan and keyd though I still want Alan to figure out law has the hots for him or better yet for Law to confess his dirty little secret lol.