So great to see an update on this story. Great Chapter I cannot wait for this to be done so I can read part two.

Ahh I love this story so much! I'm a bit of a lurker, I've been keeping and eye on this since you posted the rewritten version but have yet to review till now. I just wanted you to know how much I've enjoyed this story so far and always eagerly await updates. I'm sorry to hear about your poor health, and I've signed up to donate a small amount each month (I'm just a poor student :P) How many chapters left of this story? And will you be rewriting the other books in the series? Thank you for posting!

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God, this story is just too delicious. Finally! The kid gets it! I can't wait to see what the hell he does with this newfound information. I adore your writing so damn much, it kills me to wait for each new chapter, but I devour them as soon as they come out! I'll definitely be looking into this Patreon thingy whatever it's called. Goodness...I need to fan myself down. Best wishes to your recovery and improving health! Update soooooon!

*waits patiently for more*

Ugh, I just want them to have the smex!

So this story is amazing and all, but apparently it's still not done being uploaded even though there are two or three other books out already and it's killing me to not be able to read them. I love the high quality read of a well-revised story, but please update soon! Also, much as I love Alan as a narrator, his incessant swearing in the narration itself is getting slightly distracting. I'm all for crude characters and swearing but it does get a little much when I start counting the number of curses in a paragraph... Just saying.

Many kudos from a new, very obliging fan of your work,

Kerrigas

I remember reading this back when it was complete, and me, bored today, decides to look for something, and stumbles upon this again. I think "well, I'll just read it again!" Except, it's not complete. Just my luck. No matter. I can patiently wait for updates. Anyway, as bad at reviews as I am, I always try to leave them. Just wanted to say I love the world you've built. It's very different from anything I've ever encountered (and that's say something, I browse through fantasy a lot). Ever thought of publishing it? Because you should.

Enjoying this

Oh my GODS. I just... I am... This is perfect.
I adore not only the plot, but the characters (Personalities, Backgrounds and... species), the way you write (Easy to read, no boring spaces), and your grammar is gorgeous.
Frick... I am crappy at reviews, but basically I just needed to state how much I loved this book. Which was, obviously, a lot. I needed something to read, something other than your average mary-sue or smutty slash fic... And boy did I find it.
Now I just seem like a suck-up, but words cannot describe how freaking much I enjoyed it. Or maybe they would if I knew how to write... Anyway. Thank you so much for writing this!
Thank you very much!

i don't think words can explain how happy i am after reading this (the four parts, not just this one)
i never knew that there was such an inspiring piece of fiction online such as this, oh gosh! this really makes me reflect back on the meaning of "love" once again... thank you so much for putting this online!

Nice story, though I would think he would freak out a bit more at the whole 'wet dream about a guy' part, if he wasn't already bisexual or homosexual.

Absolutely love this story! You write so well, and I adore Alan's character! Loving the world you've created, and the unique concepts you're incorporating. Can't wait for more!

This has been a really cool little story to lose myself in. I hope you post another chapter soon!

...okay, QUESTION.
WHAT.
Like, huh?
I went to look for the next book but then it gave me more info than this book actually says and then I noticed that this is marked as incomplete but there are like four books so.
Wassgoinon?