I really think I like this story a Lot. I just got really into it and it just got really interesting so why the hell did you just delete those chapters from the whole internet instead of just leaving them there until you did your update ? Honestly I really think no one would care if they are not from the same re-write your story is great but why just why did you do that as far as I can tell these might be the most important chapters of the whole series and I can't read them now and I almost smashed my phone cause I went to 2 other websites to find your story only to see that you did the same thing there you might think that's funny but I wasn't feeling good today and I finally found a great book to read and then after only 3 hours of reading a can't fucking continue and that's just plain torture and sorry if this sounds like I am rude but I really just want to consume and praise your work if you don't mind

I like your story very much so far. I love the idea and i totally get it and I also love the chracters but i am really fighting myself right now because i can't continue reading because the chapters that are missing from Light and Shadow 1 are nowhere to be found. I wanted to read your story because it sounded interesting and it wouldn't just stop after 3 hours of reading because you have already 4 books of it and i am really looking forward to those so if anyone is reading this: Please could you send me the link to where i can read those missing chapters? I googled for almost an hour now and i couldn't find anything and now i am really mad at you(author) but I also love you for writing this story but i can't just leave a story where i know that more chapters are on my frickin screen but i can't read them cause other chapters are missing and usually i don't write long reviews because my writing-english isn't that good but i really need your help because that's just not fair. It's not funny i feel really bad why couldn't you just leave the un-rewritten chapters on? People already read those and liked them it wouldn't hurt anybody but you just erased them from everywhere and hurt me. I know you aren't getting paid for this.. i just really want to enjoy your work!

all smiles i know this isnt a new story but im a first time reader so i do little happy dances when you update

Seeing this chapter up was the best thing that happened to me this month. This story is just awesome and every time I read it, it makes me happy. Thank you!

ugh weird read more later

So glad to see an update. Wonder if we'll ever find out the intricacies of ahieel and rysa. Also, I will always vote for more alan and keyd though I still want Alan to figure out law has the hots for him or better yet for Law to confess his dirty little secret lol.

Haha, A wet dream. xD

OMG I HAD A HEART ATTACK AT HOW CASUAL KEYD IS ABOUT TOUCHING OMG

I have the strangest feeling that Law has a crush on Alan.

I have a feeling Keyd is going to fall in love with Alan. 3

Omg Keyd is a cutie.

Wow this story is great! Not really happy about the update intervals.

So... I'll try not to be mean, but you've been kinda mean with the whole yearly update thing when we have all expressed our love for this story so supportively. At least give us a heads up on when you'll be updating next, time frame or something. It will encourage us readers to really hold faith with this story and not assume that you'll just leave us hanging if you don't update for a little over a couple of months. This story is great and I understand that it may take a whole lot to come up with a long ass chapter that you actually like and want to post. You also don't even have to explain why you update with SUCH. LARGE. GAPS. But it would be really nice and I'm pretty sure everyone would appreciate it, I know I would :D Now! I absolutely loved this chapter, it has so much progress with their relationship in it and I'm just dying to find out what will happen next. Please update soon... or however long soon is to you... or something like that... but yeah ;)

-NaoEG

Hahahahah oh I love Alan! He is such a great narrator :) He is so self-deprecating sometimes, and the way he scolds himself in his head just cracks me up! I really like this chapter, I love that the three of them are all getting to know more about each other and becoming more comfortable, especially Keyd and Alan ;) I feel bad for Alan about the kiss. . . I get the feeling he might have wanted it to mean more. He is just having a hard time around Keyd! Haha he just finds him too darn sexy ;) But at least I think Keyd is starting to like Alan, it warms my heart when he smiles at him. . . how cute! Learning about the war made me nervous, it adds a whole deeper, darker, sort of hopeless feel to the story, I never like it when their is less good guys :( Or when the earth is in danger. . . I also feel bad for Alan because it has seriously been such a long time since he has slept well. . . poor guy, I don't know how he is functioning with all of those nightmares :( I am really curious about what happened when Alan touched Keyd's marks, cause it definitely seemed like something happened. I can't wait for Alan to go back to school, that will surely be interesting (seeing Law again!). I am also excited for him to start learning more magical stuff. Anyway, awesome chapter, loved that is was so long! I can't wait for the next update! What will happen to our poor Alan next? Love your writing, very creative story :) Update soon, please ;)

3 so glad for an update! I discovered this story by accident and I'm so hooked that I would check for an update every week even though I hadn't received an alert.