Excuse me while I squeal in girlish delight and flail helplessly. THIS CHAPTER. MY BODY WAS SO READY. Thank you so much oh my gosh, you have no idea how excited I got when I realized you had updated. This chapter is so perfect and I am so ready for how uncomfortable he is going to feel when he finally sees Keyd. YES! Bwahaha! Squirm, Alan, SQUIRM amidst all your feels!

haha he had a wet dream
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That was so hot and totally necessary add more.

Well worth the wait, Damn good chapter. The photo shoot was a great idea.

wow, this was just so fucking awesome... again :)... i was sleeping when i dot the message that you updated again ... and i just couldn’t keep sleeping because i had to know whats going to happen... and i love it :)... its killing me that i have to wait so long for a new update... but its so worth it to me :)... you are an amazing writer 3

Oh, my, god. Just do it. Please. Take my money. I have read this at least three times and have not gotten tired of it. I love it so, so much. Your character development is so real and FUCKING PERFECT. It makes me want to slap Alan and hug Keyd and I can't even deal. Seriously, thank you for writing and let me know when/if you publish.

Also, I hope you continue writing Obscura. I know it's probably annoying to rewrite an entire story/series, but Keyd is definitely my favorite character.

I brought in the new year with your update makes me incredibly happy

Well, this is interesting so far. Everything that has happened is very unexpected and I'm curious to know more.
Your story is entertaining and well-written. It is a little slow moving-a lot of words for only a couple significant events.
Thank you for the story! I'm excited for more.

I am so in love with this story! You can't imagine how hesitant I was to reach the end of chapter 7! I want more. PLEASE MORE! I am so absolutely in love with these characters and Alan reminds me of myself a bit. Except more f bombs. I hope you update soon. There is just too much wondrousness in this for me not to CRAVE more! I adore the stark contrasts between Alan and Keyd and Rysa and I'm so happy Keyd is finally coming around. So much hilarity and intensity and excitement. Please please PLEASE update soon! Thank you for creating such an amazing story! Favoriting!

I hope this doesn't sound pushy or rude, but can you please try updating faster? You don't know how tempting it is for me not to go right on and read part 2. Incase you didn't notice this story is too good to wait for an update and i know you're busy but godness, you don't know how many times ive opened and closed part 2.

Love the story.

this story is f***ing awesome and i can't wait to read more

I need more, my life depends on it! Marvelous, please update as soon as you can. I love the slow even pace of this story and how the characters seem unruled in their development. Please update!

Really cool story so far. Look forward to reading more

Okay, first of all, I am LOVING this story! I've seen it favorited on so many other authors' pages, and I finally got around to reading it, and I am HOOKED! I am a little confused, though, about the order of the story...this is the first book, and I went to the second book (Chiaroscuro draft), but it picks up at a different spot to where this book left off, and I'm really confused. Is Tenebris still being written? Or does it continue somewhere else in another book? Cause you left off at a cliff hanger, and I'm DYING to know what happens next! Anyway, I'd love an answer so I can figure out if I have to wait for the next chapter of Tenebris, or if I can read the next part in another book. Thanks so much for this amazing story!

Oshini

I gotta say, I'm hooked. The plot alone drew me in. I completely forgot about the possible romance except when I came across certain scenes. I can hardly wait for the next update!

Yeah, their first kiss! Long way from here! But so worth it!

Looking forward to the next part of the rewrite