| Reviews for Tenebrism |
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  Bananafishh chapter 7 . 9/25/2013 Another great chapter :) I'm still disappointed that I couldn't read the old version. I'd like to know what happens and just see it unfold in a better way. The tension is delicious. Keep up the good work :) Kudos to you author xxx |
| Guest chapter 7 . 9/24/2013 Finally, I got to read about that first kiss. Ah, sigh... Great chapter! |
| Guest chapter 7 . 9/22/2013 Whaaaaaat? Wow, that was intense! What is going on with those two? Does Keyd have a different definition of kiss, cause didn't seem to think anything of it. I really like this story, I have spent the last day reading it! I think that Alan, although he does swear a lot, is a really interesting protagonist. And the two aliens, love them! I definitely like Keyd more now that he is talking and being sort of protective of Alan. I want to know what is up with Alan's freaky dreams and Law! Something is unresolved there. . . Anyway, thanks for updating, I can't wait to see where this story goes! Love your writing and the plot, it is so original and fantastic! |
 NaoEarthGoddess chapter 7 . 9/22/2013 Holy moly! He kissed Alan! Whoa I see future makeout sessions! Please please continue in a shorter time period. ;) -NaoEG |
| mouse chapter 7 . 9/22/2013 oH my gosh Keyd and Alan's interactions are killing me. I love reading every new bit of this story as it unfolds and I can't wait to find out what happens next! As much as I do love the boys though I hope there will be some awesome Rysa scenes in the next chapter... she's awesome. Keep up the awesome work! |
| HIVENET chapter 7 . 9/22/2013 haha oh my god I can just imagine Alan's face while he's like backing out of his room and fumbling for the doorknob the poor dude i have a feeling that the touch was waaay more casual to keyd than it was to alan |
| Buzz Bee chapter 7 . 9/22/2013 this chapter was 100% worth the wait but now what do I do with my life now that I have to wait for the next one |
| Pomperepozza chapter 7 . 9/22/2013 Yes, a new chapter! :D I really enjoy this story. I did not read it before this re-write but could not wait for this book to be finished so I've actually read all the others, despite this big chunk at the start missing. It's nice to now finally get a new piece of the puzzle to how it all started. Can't wait for more :) |
| Kilian Grey chapter 7 . 9/21/2013 Wonderful chapter, the interaction between Alan and Keyd is written so well. The awful action scenes made me so nervous I had no idea what was going to happen, it was terribly stressful, good for you. The scene in the bedroom where Alan takes his hand and feels for the bad buzzy stuff is very clever. And the touch experiment, ah! Good for Keyd. |
| Halie chapter 6 . 8/27/2013 This is amazing! 3 |
| Sariiquel chapter 6 . 8/10/2013 This whole thing is amazing. I really wish you would update :[ it feels like i've been waiting years. |
| isis-yolly chapter 6 . 8/9/2013 Love it! More Please! |
| estarianne chapter 6 . 7/29/2013 The protagonist in this story is quite passive and ineffective. It is my least favorite type of character, because they are mostly observers and have little influence on the plot. He can barely finish a sentence, and is ready to believe that his opinions are meaningless. It could be a cute story if the mc was just a little less of a doormat. |
| PyroTech chapter 6 . 7/14/2013 Nooooo! I've read this story before, but it was such a long time ago. I can't wait to reread it lol |
| EllePi chapter 6 . 7/8/2013 I didn't read this story before you revised it, but I'm interested in what I'm seeing so far. Yay GoodReads :P |