|Reviews for down with this ship|
| young and the reckless chapter 1 . 6/6/2009
ah, Brand New - the lyrics are fantastic.
as for your piece, i love metaphors and this one is great.
i especially loved the line,
"and we are dying, inch by inch by inch"
very nice :)
| LovetheMadness chapter 1 . 11/4/2008
very well written
| she's not breathing chapter 1 . 11/2/2008
haha, when i saw the title of this the first thing i thought of was that song. god i love it - i was ecstatic when it turned out to actually be a link to it.
this is lovely - i think it takes a bit to really start hitting, but the line "there aren't enough lifeboats in the world/ to get us out of this mess/" is /so/ great, & i love love love that second stanza - that's just beautiful. & like i already said, i adore brand new to death. so nice choice spinning something off them ;)
| Fei chapter 1 . 11/1/2008
I liked it. It's very lyrical - like a song without music or something, and it's very moving. Lovely, and somehow it feels metaphorical to me rather than literal.