Reviews for Pure Born |
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![]() ![]() Woahh... Where are the rest of the chapters? Oh n the story is amazing by the way. It is exactly what i look for in a story. Its quite cliche but the way you wrote it made it seem... Original. Now where is the rest of the chapters? |
![]() ![]() Y is the chapters skipping? Its a good story bt it isn't full...I,would love to read the full story |
![]() ![]() Awwwww you took it down :( ur a great writer though but it can be hard to finnish story's. Keep writing |
![]() ![]() This is one of the reasons why I hate authors with so many stories..if they lack the 'fire' to updaet they will just ditch the story and start one a new one... If you want to be a good one, be serious and don't take writing lightly. |
![]() ![]() ![]() .Cries. I'M NOT LYING! |
![]() ![]() NNO! Holy crap you just killed me D: Oh, well, I'll deal with it (: Hopefully you get your flow going and upload whenever you're ready XD I'll be messaging you for those rough chapters (: |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hello! So, I'm totally disappointed! From what I've read this story seems amazing. And I love that we both pictured Alex Pettyfer as Micah. (I didn't even know you did until I read the important note! ) hopefully you get your mojo back to finish this story one day because I'd like to actually read the whole thing. -Bre |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw! that's awful! no more :( I really don't know what to say. Been waiting ages to see what happens just to find it end at a cliffhanger with no ending at all. |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story. even if you just keep the first chapter it reads well and feels like it had an ending. i loved it! your writing is easy to follow and full of discriptions; i could see it all happening in my head as i read it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, I guess you gotta do what you gotta do. Anyway, I really enjoy your writing and I'd absolutely love to read the unedited work if you'd send it to me. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw I'm so sad to see you go :( I really liked your writing ! But ya I'd love to read the unedited stuff for pure born you know to get some type if closure for the story :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really hope to see more soon. Thank You. LVN |
![]() ![]() ![]() whoa that was awesome! It had hurt, comfort,drama,action and romance I cant waitfor you to finish your amazing story |
![]() ![]() ![]() great job sad to see come to the end |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOL, I was right! I knew it was the grandpa! Lmao, well that was really god.(: & yay, he's dead! Wow, that sounds bad. Lol. Oh yeah, brittany is gonna be a vampire now. Cool.(; This was reeally good.(: Update soon! |