Reviews for Witch's Shadow
Guest chapter 1 . 1/10/2016
I really really loved your story. It was cute, and very well written. I thought the ending was meh, it didn't really flow smoothly with the story, but I understand that he had to have an internal debate on whether or not he should stay or go with Nell. Oh Nell, what an adorable character. I was disappointed to see this was your only story, I was definitely looking forward to reading more ofyour work. It's been years since this was posted, so I have no doubt that you won't read this but I hope you are doing well and still writing.
D.H. L'Orange chapter 1 . 7/24/2013
Awe so sweet!
indy chapter 1 . 5/23/2013
that was a good one. like, an amaaaazingly good one. just the way i like it. and there ain't lot of them.
and i know there's no substance to this review, but i just had to post it... i feel really bad that such a good story remains so underappreciated after all this time.
H chapter 1 . 4/29/2012
Compelling, romantic, well-written and utterly unique. I love Toby, I love Nell, even the Chief and Roran hold a tiny little place in my heart. Congratulations on such a brilliant story! I really enjoyed it, and I hope that you continue writing.
pradlee chapter 1 . 3/11/2012
total (slashed, happy-ending) parody of "Of Mice and Men," yo!

was the similarity on purpose?
ImmanenceEnsured chapter 1 . 1/4/2012
I did like this story, although it was kinda cheesy:) Your characters are well-chosen and realistic and the plot was nice, I like it you didn't rush anything. Only the ending is meh. Cause Toby is giving up everything, and the only thing Nell can do is smile and give him a kiss? Nell should talk at the end, I think.
Lucid-Insanity chapter 1 . 9/15/2011
This was very good, and I enjoyed it alot. I love the slow buildup and Toby's realization of his attraction to Nell and how he does'nt just give in but has to come to terms with them in a realistic manner.

I wouls love to see more on the Chief and Ronan as well and can't wait for the sequel. I really hope Toby and Nell are able to safely get away, and I want to know what the witch was on when she saw darkness in Nell's harmless soul.
frolic-horror chapter 1 . 9/8/2011
Beautiful story! I'm looking forward to some sequels because there's much more to find out... I think this is the begining of a beautiful "friendship" :D
Shadowed and Shattered chapter 1 . 11/2/2008
Wow. *giggles* I love this. It's so... very awesome. I'll definitely be on the look out for more on these guys. :)
Lil K-Chan chapter 1 . 11/2/2008
all i have to say is this:


I LOVE this fic so much, it was so sweet and just so darn perfect. God I think I'll love you even more if you made a squeal! This fic is truly amazing and as you can tell, i'm in love with it. Thank hun, for such a wonderful read .