I really really loved your story. It was cute, and very well written. I thought the ending was meh, it didn't really flow smoothly with the story, but I understand that he had to have an internal debate on whether or not he should stay or go with Nell. Oh Nell, what an adorable character. I was disappointed to see this was your only story, I was definitely looking forward to reading more ofyour work. It's been years since this was posted, so I have no doubt that you won't read this but I hope you are doing well and still writing.

Awe so sweet!

that was a good one. like, an amaaaazingly good one. just the way i like it. and there ain't lot of them.
and i know there's no substance to this review, but i just had to post it... i feel really bad that such a good story remains so underappreciated after all this time.

Compelling, romantic, well-written and utterly unique. I love Toby, I love Nell, even the Chief and Roran hold a tiny little place in my heart. Congratulations on such a brilliant story! I really enjoyed it, and I hope that you continue writing.

total (slashed, happy-ending) parody of "Of Mice and Men," yo!

was the similarity on purpose?

I did like this story, although it was kinda cheesy:) Your characters are well-chosen and realistic and the plot was nice, I like it you didn't rush anything. Only the ending is meh. Cause Toby is giving up everything, and the only thing Nell can do is smile and give him a kiss? Nell should talk at the end, I think.

This was very good, and I enjoyed it alot. I love the slow buildup and Toby's realization of his attraction to Nell and how he does'nt just give in but has to come to terms with them in a realistic manner.

I wouls love to see more on the Chief and Ronan as well and can't wait for the sequel. I really hope Toby and Nell are able to safely get away, and I want to know what the witch was on when she saw darkness in Nell's harmless soul.

Beautiful story! I'm looking forward to some sequels because there's much more to find out... I think this is the begining of a beautiful "friendship" :D

Wow. *giggles* I love this. It's so... very awesome. I'll definitely be on the look out for more on these guys. :)

all i have to say is this:

YOU ROCK MY SOXS!

I LOVE this fic so much, it was so sweet and just so darn perfect. God I think I'll love you even more if you made a squeal! This fic is truly amazing and as you can tell, i'm in love with it. Thank hun, for such a wonderful read .