Reviews for Not Gold
DefineBeauty chapter 1 . 12/30/2008
oh wow...this is beautiful! i love the emotion you put into this, it's clear how the person is feeling and i felt it too as i was reading this

i also like the descriptivenss and imagery you put in (ex: stained orange and crimson by the sun,), they are beautiful!

love is used in alot of pieces, but i think you did really well with this. it doesn't seem cliched or anything, just simple and beautiful ] i really like it ]]
smile for the sunshine chapter 1 . 11/2/2008
that's really cute. loves it. such beautiful imagery laced this poem. excellent work. keep writing.