Reviews for Beautiful Mistakes
noyzcrkit chapter 2 . 12/13/2010
Just wanted to point out a few discrepancies . . . . at the end of last chapter, Julie said she had to work at 4 on Friday, so the interview would have to be before then, but at the beginning of this chapter she agrees to a 6:45 interview . . . . unless it's a.m.? Then, later in the chapter, Julie is pleased that Matt remembers she works at Pizza Hut . . . . only isn't it KFC? Minor things, but they disrupt the flow. Otherwise I am enjoying the story so far, and looking forward to continuing!
Mariposa-12 chapter 27 . 12/12/2010
Hey! I just finished reading this story and i really liked the plot. It had a good amount of drama but it wasn't all thrown out there since the begining which kept the story interesting. The only thing thta took me by surprise was that i don't remember aaron and julie say "i love you" to each other. Yes they said they wNted to be with each other but sometimes i got the feeling that they didn't have much chemistry and that they were together because it was convenient for both of them. Don't get me wrong, i love how julie and aaron interact with each other but, sometimes, it just felt like aaron loved the idea of the family more than julie herself. Maybe its just how i read it or maybe i was expecting more lovey-dovey stuff haha i don't i did like the story a lot that was jut something i picked up.

Good job!

I hope to read some more from you. I've read some of your other stories and i really like your style. Thanks!
momo3069 chapter 27 . 12/11/2010
What a sweet story! I liked it a lot.

Keep writing!
tpodiag chapter 14 . 12/10/2010
Hey! STILL loving your story! *In Love* If your story was a man, I'd kidnap it and force it to marry me. . . . .

Anyway, just finished Chapter 13 and the only thing I could think of that was out of place was at the end of Chapter 12, Julie went to sleep in Aaron's bed and it ended right there, and you didn't mention any of it in Chapter 13. XD

That's all I noticed, but I forgive you this time...

jmr79au chapter 27 . 12/10/2010
i loved this story so much. I was so obsessed with it, that i was late for work 4 times and didn't go to bed till 3 in the morning sometimes. This is because I found your story once it was finished and I couldn't 'put it down'. I can't wait to read more stories by you.

*,*,*,*,* 5 Stars (5/5)
justkiro chapter 26 . 12/9/2010
in the other review, after i commented about your vocabulary, I wrote that I sometimes had to dictionary dot com it. but I wrote it all together with a . and for some reason it didn't show up. lol sorry to review again for this dumb correction. GREAT STORY ) keep writing!
justkiro chapter 27 . 12/9/2010
I just started this story yesterday and I've literally been sitting in front of the computer for hours cause I was so into the story. It was amazingly written. I have to say I admire your very vast vocabulary. I had to it sometimes but none the less it was well worth it ) Great story. At first it was hard for me to like Julie because she made the worst choices ever but as the story progressed I liked that she became more strong as a person. However, I liked Aaron from the beginning ) But I've got to say your an amazing writer and I thoroughly enjoyed this story from beginning to end.

I'm not sure if i commented on your other story "brothers and best friends" but I started reading the story years ago and never got the chance to finish it because updates were few and far between. Maybe I'll re-read it and finish it!

Ps: the only negative comment (if it even is that big a deal) is that there were few grammar/spelling errors here and there but that can be easily fixed! just wanted to let you know )
Blue Sword chapter 27 . 12/9/2010
Just when I've given up looking for good stories on Fictionpress...I stumbled upon yours!

I must! This is a really fantastic story. I just love it! Its such a breath of fresh air from the typical cliche romances. Great job! I hope you write more :) I'm gonna read your other works now~
schoeppc chapter 27 . 12/7/2010
Wonderful story! You really did an amazing job.
SometimesG chapter 26 . 12/7/2010
I also wanted to add that you made Aaron a lovable and endearing character ... he is excited to become a father and share these experiences with Julie. I like how quickly he took on to fatherhood and even considers the child as his.

As for Julie, I thought she was flightly and lacking substance when she hooked up with Matt. But she proved to be strong, funny and supportive of Matt when it came to choosing who and what she wants for her future. I am glad she made her choice very clear to Matt... to be with Aaron and give him the family that he wants and deserves.
soxluvabl3 chapter 27 . 12/5/2010
omg this was an ADORABLE story. loved it. i'm so happy that aaron and julie are going to have a second child! i can't even imagine aaron's excitement. FANTASTIC STORY.
SometimesG chapter 27 . 12/5/2010
I read your story for the first time today and completed it - thanks for completing it. I was worried about Julie in the beginning - but she made the best out of the situation and found love and redemption and happiness with Aaron.

I love the happy ending - with another baby on the way. It made up for the heartaches in the beginning chapters.
witz13 chapter 27 . 12/5/2010
awesome! keep writing!
oxBlueEyes15xo chapter 27 . 12/5/2010
i love happy endings! I so loved this story, shame it's done, but so glad to read what happened!

Loved it!
chng234 chapter 27 . 12/4/2010
this is so sweet.. they r having another baby
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