Reviews for Beautiful Mistakes
DA-chen1 chapter 27 . 7/18/2012
I knew it, since the chapter started! :-)
Greatygreat! Finally, his own child! Hihi... great plotline, a bit much of Leigh but in the end, sooo good! Love your story!
Mira
DA-chen1 chapter 26 . 7/18/2012
Oh... your story was so sweet!
I think, it's not easy to play the fatherhood, when you are infantile.. but I really like them together and how he is really trying! Sometimes I thought, he is only with her because of Alyssa! But then I thought about the times, when they were talking and spending time together.. he really likes her! ;-)
Mira
DA-chen1 chapter 25 . 7/18/2012
Love it more!
Mira
DA-chen1 chapter 24 . 7/18/2012
What is going to happen here? She tries to kiss him?
Mira
DA-chen1 chapter 23 . 7/18/2012
Sweet! Love it!
Mira
DA-chen1 chapter 22 . 7/18/2012
That was sweet and really great! Love them both! No, the three together :") Or perhaps, four? ;-)
Mira
DA-chen1 chapter 21 . 7/17/2012
Love it.. really..dearly.. :-))
Mira
J.H. McFarland chapter 27 . 7/17/2012
I can't remember if I've posted a review on here or not, because I've read this story several times. lol. But I just want to say that I absolutely LOVE the way you made it seem like Matt was the lead male, and then switched over to Aaron! It was so seamless and perfectly transitioned (redundant but I don't care) and before I realized it, you flipped the entire story around. I LOVE this. PLEASE get it published so I can BUY it. I want a hard copy of this story!
DA-chen1 chapter 20 . 7/17/2012
Oh no.. and what is Shannon's evil plan? :-(
Mira
DA-chen1 chapter 19 . 7/17/2012
So sweet! He is sexy and all.. but has his secrets, too! :-( Who knows..
Mira
DA-chen1 chapter 17 . 7/17/2012
Hi, dear author!
THIS chapter was your best, so far! :-))
Really great how both of them managed the situation in the hospital and afterwards! I begin to love Aaron as a character! Great!
Mira
DA-chen1 chapter 16 . 7/17/2012
Something is fishy here.. perhaps he has his own scheme about Julie.. to trust her with the restaurant because he has better things to do..? Open up another restaurant.. no.. perhaps he is ill? Must go to a treatment at the hospital? Hmm.. really suspicious! And I don't think, Aaron is a lamb! But Matt is not the best brother and person.. can she trust him?
Mira
DA-chen1 chapter 15 . 7/17/2012
Really cute, how she lies in bed and is thinking about this twisted situation! :-)
Mira
DA-chen1 chapter 14 . 7/17/2012
Hey.. I think, the deal is not that bad.. but you never know what Emma has in mind..
Mira
DA-chen1 chapter 13 . 7/17/2012
Sweetie pie :-))
Mira
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