Reviews for Beautiful Mistakes
Guest chapter 9 . 7/2/2012
He's buying her. What a bastard. It's so degrading the way he treats her, and she should be smart enough not to let him walk over her.
Preposterous chapter 2 . 7/1/2012
He was talking about his situation when he advised her! Should have ditched his wife a long time ago.
Guest chapter 27 . 6/24/2012
Oh the drama, what a wonderful story! I loved the banter between Julie and Aaron, very funny. The story could have ended when Julie and Aaron finallly got together and I would have been content but I'm so glad it didn't. It was really nice to see them develop their little family. Such a good story!
carleyshake chapter 1 . 6/4/2012
They are so sweet\\
loveofallthatisawesome chapter 26 . 5/14/2012
This was amazing! Adorable and just beautiful! I can honestly believe that Aaron is Alyssa's real father. He just fits so perfectly with the role and everything that there's no doubt in my mind that he is the father.

This was just fantastic :D
loveofallthatisawesome chapter 7 . 5/13/2012
I loved how this chapter was played out! I mean, Julie kind of knew what she was getting into and I'm so glad that she didn't delude herself into thinking that she was going to have this amazing life with Matt and that he was going to leave Emma. I'm glad, because honestly they really did only know each other for a really short time, so it would only make sense for them not to be so attached. I'm glad she stuck up for herself too.

Amazing chapter :D I loved it
twibbit chapter 27 . 3/27/2012
:) awwww! Amazing story !
NatassiaMaria chapter 26 . 3/11/2012
Oh my gosh, I love this story so much! When I read the part of Alyssa not being able to date until 16 I laughed because my mum wouldn't let me date until 18!

And then I laughed at the part of the all girl's school due to the fact that I have been to one since I was 4 and I am most certainly not lesbian.
DorkExpress chapter 27 . 11/1/2011
I really like this story... the characters are so realistic and their problems and personalities are too. I just felt kind of bad for Jack. He's lost and there's no one to help him. And Matt... poor Matt

He's such an ass!

Terri Day chapter 27 . 10/24/2011
This is without a doubt one of my absolute favourites on this website, I've probably read it about 5 times... I think it was beautifully written and moves away from your typical nanny affair story, however, there is one think I can say I didn't like & it was the fact that it was kinda rushed - some of the important things didn't make the cut, like the first time Julie & Aaron said the actual words I love you to each other and other little things like that. I still loved it though & thank you for sharing your work with us )
morexforxmeo chapter 10 . 10/22/2011
Aaron's pov? Yesssss
3DarkGoddess3 chapter 27 . 10/17/2011
I loved your story. Keep writing I can't wait to read more stories by you.
chantellovesya chapter 7 . 10/9/2011
This story was amazing until she became pregnant? It was all so sudden, six chapters I believe, and completely unrealistic. You said that you strive to make your stories "real" but I found it hard for majority of the occasions that occurred in "Beautiful Mistakes" to be an ounce of realistic.

Like, say for instance the when Anna and Julia first meet at the park. What parent doesn't watch their toddler closely? Uncaring ones. And later on Matt is just one of the most caring parents alive, chapters 1-6 at least, and it doesn't add up.

Another occasion is when Julie moves in. It's so impromptu and forced, the whole scene just doesn't flow for me.

Idk, I guess it's because I don't like stories that involve pregnancies, they ruin everything (proven in this), and that made me like it less. Maybe if Emma just found out they had been having sex and Julie moved in with Aaron I would've liked it more.
JujuA chapter 27 . 10/8/2011
Ahhh! I stumbled across this story and I totally fell in love with it! 3 There were so many moments where I smiled to myself, making my family think I was crazy and whatnot. XD I really loved this story and I love how you didn't make Julie one of those really stupid, frustrating characters. :) Definitely going to follow you and favorite this!
BeetrootIsPink chapter 27 . 9/13/2011

It was...





It was so interesting

I laughed, cried everything!
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