Reviews for Beautiful Mistakes
marijee chapter 7 . 5/15/2011
Yeah...married man...wife and child...pregnant mistress...not a good deal at all. Well Matt, I hope you get your Karma.

Julie shouldn't have gotten involved with Matt, but she did and now she's paying the consequences. It's not going to be easy for Julie keeping the baby, but she's not the first person that has had to do this. Hopefully she will find someone who cares about her.
marijee chapter 6 . 5/15/2011
This is certainly an awkward situation for Julie to be in. So is Matt going to go to her room everytime that Emma is away? Not a very fulfilling relationship if you ask me. I am really afraid that Julie is pregnant and then what is going to happen? Julie seems to have dug herself into a hole. Enjoying.
marijee chapter 5 . 5/15/2011
Well...what is Matt really thinking. Does he like Julie or does he want the wife and the mistress? What is Julie going to do? I hope she doesn't get pregnant...that would certainly screw things up worse than they are now.
marijee chapter 4 . 5/15/2011
Both couples seem to have unhappy relationships. Emma doesn't want to be a mother...and Jack just wants to have fun. Enjoying.
marijee chapter 3 . 5/14/2011
Boy, it sounds as though Matt is in a loveless marriage. I wonder why they are still together? For their child? Julie seems to be in the same boat with Jack. Sigh! Enjoying.
marijee chapter 1 . 5/14/2011
Julie seems to keep picking the wrong kind of guys. Jack seems persistent...but was he just wanting to get Julie's V-card? So I enjoyed this first chapter. Reading on. FP won't let me log in! Sorry.
goingsogagaoveryou chapter 27 . 4/18/2011
I so love your story! It's so insanely beautiful!
MrsHellman chapter 27 . 4/5/2011
I really liked this story, it would have been nicer to have Aaron remain infertile though. To not make that 'and they lived happily ever after'. Sometimes it's good with something in between. Other than that, this story was very well written. :]

honey splattered brains chapter 27 . 3/18/2011
honey splattered brains chapter 9 . 3/18/2011
I am so happy you brought Aaron into the story. I can completely see him and Julie together and him making her into a better person. Matt is such a douche bag. Actually all the guys in her life are douche bags except for Aaron. Aaron is a reverse jerk. I love characters like him. They are like secret heroes (:
Astarael-11 chapter 27 . 3/17/2011
So, I am (very slowly) making my way through all your stories and I have to say I'm enjoying them but my uni work is suffering greatly.

I really enjoyed this story. There was so much drama and you're right, it wasn't your average Nanny Diaries type story. Tbh I'm glad she didn't end up with Matt because he just seemed too perfect from the beginning except for the whole not telling his wife about the affair thing. Wow, they have SUCH a healthy relationship... NOT!

It's really interesting, though, because it seems that Aaron and Julie were in the same situation but their roles were reversed, like, Julie was the one who gets pregnant and gets burned by the guy she's having an affair with but Aaron is the one who gets hurt by his girlfriend cheating.

Also, was not expecting the whole Matt and Shannon thing either... it was a good twist. I mean, when she first came into the picture it was obvious she was an ex but I wasn't expecting the situation to be the way it was.

I think Julie was right in getting angry at Aaron for not telling him about him and Matt's wife because even though she would've been annoyed at first, I think it would've been so much better coming from him. It would be like he had nothing to hide and was just a huge mistake.

I'm glad they all got their fairytal ending and I thought what you did with the Epilogue was very clever. Hehehe, and Alyssa sounds like a sweetheart.

Anyway, I very much enjoyed this story and I am now off to read your next one!
Priscilla chapter 27 . 3/15/2011
You really are an excellent writer. Each story that I read get even better. Congratulations.

Your stories have emotion and are well written, with interesting characters and humans with faults and qualities that make us identify with them.

won a fan.

MorbidArtistLover chapter 27 . 3/10/2011
*le sigh* I first thought that this story was going to be your typical girl falls for married man and they fought all their obstacles to stay together...but I love you because it was a trap to lure and readers to something better. Jack is the character that Julie can fall back on because he is constant...he persona doesn't change. He is one of my favs...along with Aaron and Shannon...I only like her character cause she doesn't give up no matter what...well besides ther pregnacy. It was funny of you to call him the 'grumpy knight' instead of the 'knight in shining armor'.XD It showed originality...
Sakurachibi08 chapter 27 . 3/9/2011
Aww so cute!
Sakurachibi08 chapter 8 . 3/7/2011
oh, her and Aaron? Hm
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