Reviews for Play With Fire |
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![]() ![]() This story is LIFE! First u was skeptical but I'm glad I read it. Shame it took me nine years to find it |
![]() ![]() its great why don't you update more? |
![]() ![]() I hope all is well with you. This is a complex and wonderfully written text. Please do update. This story and others like have served as a distraction a happy one from the stuff of life. Wondering what will happen with Peyton and Riley. Will he find out about the baby? Is Riley going to die? Foreshadowing in previous chapter seem to lead to that with her dream of Peyton and their daughter seeing her but Peyton unable to hear her call his name. Please do update |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, just wow. |
![]() ![]() Please update love this complex story |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a good start. I like the plot and the characters. The deputy was interesting. There are some grammatical and spelling errors. Looking forward to reading more. |
![]() ![]() Amazing |
![]() ![]() I love Cole |
![]() ![]() This is so good |
![]() ![]() I can't stop reading |
![]() ![]() Great chapter |
![]() ![]() Great first chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() PLEASE complete this!ITS BEAUTIFUL!Original!breathtaking:) |
![]() ![]() I beg of you please complete this story, you can't build it up to this point and not finish it. This is by far the freshest,scariest and complex love story I've ever read. Love all the way from South Africa! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You said you would right more. There was never a ch 18. Are you stopping this story indefinitely or is it simply a hiatus until your work load reduces. I would also note it has been more than 3 years since your last update, if you were a second year, by now you should have graduated. |