Reviews for last dance
tarnished oversoul chapter 1 . 11/16/2008
don't waste words.

a poem should only ever be as many words as it takes to say what you're saying.

which this does, quite well.
none of burt's beeswax chapter 1 . 11/4/2008
i love it. it's melodic, and sh like a secret only we can hear. pretty pretty