|Reviews for victorian arches|
| master's apprentice chapter 1 . 5/4/2009
Just catching up on some reading, this poem breaks my heart, I would love to discuss this with you.
| chaos called creation chapter 1 . 1/7/2009
Never can get sick of confessional poetry :)
| smile for the sunshine chapter 1 . 11/4/2008
simple but i really like it.
| Thoth Tarot chapter 1 . 11/2/2008
confused, so what does it mean when you say that you do fill me with love etc refering to god? and later miss the promise of holding you...etc refering to man? forgiveness? for sins? m... interesting though
| Aslan Israel chapter 1 . 11/2/2008
Short but powerful. I think I would have liked to have seen some punctuation to help make your point, bring in more emphasis!
'but I still
miss the promise
of holding you and those things
I love those lines.. pure longing. I know the feeling. I close my eyes and it pulls at my heart.
:-) I don't have time to read as much as I used to, but I try! Thank you as well for the feedback. I enjoy getting it.
Aslan Leigh Israel