Exquisitely written. You paint such a clear picture with your words, I feel like I am there. The dialogue is very believable and I like the way you have portrayed both Felix and Oliver's emotional state. I am enjoying your story very much.

This story was absolutely wonderful! Funny and witty and heart wrenching. At times made my heart squeeze from heartbreak, but at others, I would laugh and chuckle at the brilliance of your writing. I read all 21 chapters in one day so I guess this review is all sort of muddled. There were many points that made a lasting impression on me.

The first I can remember is when Winnie's sister calls Winnie "Pooh-bear" and I thought it was super cute and endearing. Winnie the Pooh, huh? Anyway, Winnie has really grown on me and I think she is one of the best characters, ever. This hate-love-villain-friend relationship she has with Felix is adorable! :)

You also did a wonderful job telling the story in third person. At first it was a bit confusing because I wasn't used to the writing, but your characters in third person omniscient was extremely well developed and intriguing. I quickly grew fond of your style. It reminded me of a camera cutting off from one scene to focus on another at the right times to really draw the audience in.

Sometimes it is hard to imagine they have this much maturity in high school, but I guess it's because they are alone all the time. It was refreshing to see a story where the kids didn't hate their parents for always being gone! The parents were all cute too! So much cuteness in your story! All the characters are so cute! However, I am not too cool with Alain because what Felix had with Alain sounded a bit like rape, but I'm glad Felix isn't too hung up on him :)

And even if this chapter is not the end, it leaves with a bright outlook on their future together and I'm perfectly content where this story has ended (for three years now). I must also add here that the picture you have provided of Felix is gorgeous and it does resemble to the Felix I have imagined.

So whether you still venture on Fictionpress or not, I want to let you know that I absolutely enjoyed your work :)

Hey. :)

You're one of the best writers on here, I love everything you've written. It's amazing how much you know about the human mind and how we act and feel and think. You write so well, I both hate and love your characters, and I can relate to Oliver as I am of the jealous type too. There's certainly a lot of drama in here, so much that it exhausts me, quite frankly. But it also makes me feel, and I'm unable to pull away. This story is one hell of a roller coaster. I just.. even though you probably won't see this, I just wanted to tell you how much your writing affects me. It hits me right in the chest and twist my guts into knots, then it goes and make me laugh and feel all warm and happy. You have no idea.

It makes me sad that I noticed your stories this late on, given that you haven't been active on here for almost two years or something. I really wish you would write more. Haha, I'm thinking that if I had noticed you earlier, while you were still here, maybe I could convince you to keep writing. Who knows why you're not here anymore. Maybe you just had enough, and decided to start living rather than writing. But then, I think all your followers would at least deserve some kind of notice or explanation before you left. So maybe it's something else. Maybe you died. But that's a little bit too dramatic for silly me. Ahh, I don't know.

Anyway.. I'm just praying that you'll by some fantastic happening log onto your account and see this, and then write again. Because you are that fantastic.

- haha, appears that I wasn't logged inn when I posted the comment...

But yeah, to add even more letters to this... letter. I can understand why people are angry with you. Fuck, even I feel the black tar in my guts when thinking about the fact that you just left without a word. I mean, when you post a story onto this webpage and get hundreds of followers, you have a responsibility towards said followers. We committed HOURS of our lives to your words, we deserve at least some explanation. Now, all I can think of as an excuse for this absence is that you died. But I don't want to believe that. So I'm gonna keep waiting, come back after some months and hope that by some wonderful miracle, a light bulb flashed in your head and you remembered! You remembered that 'oh, that's right, I have hundreds of fans waiting for me.'

I love/hate you. I love and hate the fact that I ever came across these stories, because they're fantastic, but they left me undone, and it'll take a long time for me to get over this! Haha, no, I'll be fine. Eventually.

- Yours truly - the milk is starting to sour over here...

Hey. :)

You're one of the best writers on here, I love everything you've written. It's amazing how much you know about the human mind and how we act and feel and think. You write so well, I both hate and love your characters, and I can relate to Oliver as I am of the jealous type too. There's certainly a lot of drama in here, so much that it exhausts me, quite frankly. But it also makes me feel, and I'm unable to pull away. This story is one hell of a roller coaster. I just.. even though you probably won't see this, I just wanted to tell you how much your writing affects me. It hits me right in the chest and twist my guts into knots, then it goes and make me laugh and feel all warm and happy. You have no idea.

It makes me sad that I noticed your stories this late on, given that you haven't been active on here for almost two years or something. I really wish you would write more. Haha, I'm thinking that if I had noticed you earlier, while you were still here, maybe I could convince you to keep writing. Who knows why you're not here anymore. Maybe you just had enough, and decided to start living rather than writing. But then, I think all your followers would at least deserve some kind of notice or explanation before you left. So maybe it's something else. Maybe you died. But that's a little bit too dramatic for silly me. Ahh, I don't know.

Anyway.. I'm just praying that you'll by some fantastic happening log onto your account and see this, and then write again. Because you are that fantastic.

I love Felix. I can relate to him so easily, being shunned for doing better than everyone. It sucks when people give you evil stares for being better than them, because its not like you can do anything to change that, except perform badly. It also hurts when people don't want to be associated with you because they are jealous, especially when you are craving for their friendship.

what the fuck? you can't just abandon two of the greatest slash stories on fp! seriously, are you ok? I mean, you didn't even mention a hiatus, and abandoned them at their peak...that's torturous, you know? being awol is NOT attractive, ya know? so, fucking COME BACK.

One word: FINALLY!

To the milk bottle,

Cows around the world are now mooing in delight because of the lack of angst in this chapter.

Your calcium deficient friend,

lightXdarkness

To the milk bottle,

This chapter was so WOAHWTFAWESUMNOTREALLYBUTWOA H and I want to punch Oliver right now, and the entire time when Felix was so helpless, I felt like rushing over to give him a big hug. I wanted to hurl my empty milk bottles at Oliver for that shtick he pulled.

Your calcium deficient friend,

lightXdarkness

Why didn't yoi finish the story? Damnit!

Dude, people are on the verge of murder because of you.
Why didn't you finish this when you were writing it two years ago? You're literally one chapter from a proper ending.
Hear the distressed calls of your followers! Finish the bloody story pleaaaaaaase...

Hopefully you update soon.
This is a great story!

why won't you update :(

previously known as mistressELEMENT.
i can't believe it's been two years since this was last updated.. it's a shame.
you have a busy life, i'm sure, but still, it's just sad.
thank you for the amazing story while it lasted.
please don't get upset (if you even read this) because i'm assuming it's over.
i just don't know what else to think.
i can't remember if it's always taken you this long.
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always a fan,
jb

Please tell me you haven't given up on this story! And so close to the end to! Please don't leave us hanging! I need to know how Oliver is going to fix this, I love this story too much!