Reviews for Anything You Can Do I Can Do Better
mmaii chapter 25 . 1/23/2011
This was a really good story, but I hated her mother. I did not think that this story was cliche i dont know why i think so but it made me love the story more.

I also liked the ending were she wrote about him in her book. Never read something like that before. In your epilogue it says The end or is it? I hope is not, maybe you could do a sequel :)
ahahah chapter 25 . 12/23/2010
I did not really connect with any of the characters. The dialog to me felt repetitive and forced. "Mad women, evil women, ..." I would advice you fix some details from the description of your story for it has nothing to do really with the story, in my opinion. Descriptions of characters where a little off as well. And well...more details as in happenings and more interaction between the characters, maybe trying a different approach?

There is always space to improve, keep on writing (:
PotOfGoldXxx chapter 25 . 11/30/2010
Do Caleb and Sophie end up together?:D
Amanda Adams chapter 1 . 11/18/2010
I enjoyed this chapter a lot. I look forward to reading more. Rachel is quite a character. I especially enjoy the way you write. It feels very real as I read. Nice job. You have a way with words.
LaughsWithTears chapter 25 . 11/7/2010
That was fabulous. Ended just the way I wanted it to.
LaughsWithTears chapter 7 . 10/28/2010
Sweet. I love Matt!
LaughsWithTears chapter 3 . 10/25/2010
Love it. Rachel reminds me of myself. ::)
Amber Rhodes chapter 22 . 10/16/2010
its a good story so far. In the earlier chapters I wanted more conflict so I enjoy the new development with the mother. :) rachel is a bit of a childish character but she grows on you and I feel like there is more to her than just her fun personality. I enjoy it so far and I hope to know the history behind eric.
do not click chapter 25 . 8/26/2010
this is an amazing story! i love the way you made Rachels character, and gregs contant mood changed are strange but funy :) i loved matt alot, he made me laugh with everything he said. you should get this published or something :D
So.Who.Will.Call.Me.Beautiful chapter 25 . 6/27/2010
I absolutely adore this story. Actually, this is my second time reading it, and I'm a bit suprised I didn't review before. Fantastically well written and I have to say that I actually got teary-eyed at the end. Definitely still my favorite story up to date. I had a lot of fun reading this and I can guarantee that this won't be my last time reading this story again.
lijuan chapter 1 . 5/30/2010
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eiyuang999 chapter 1 . 5/24/2010
hi !

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TrixieBell chapter 25 . 5/16/2010
hahahaha! i lovedd this :D :D thanks so much! it was amazing! you have a gift. _
sandcastlesinthesand chapter 25 . 4/1/2010
aw that was so amazing!
christinaxxyo chapter 25 . 10/30/2009
This was really cute and flowed very well. I thought you did a great job! :D
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