Reviews for Cruelty
aresaresares6 chapter 5 . 8/2/2015
Ohhhh boy, I hope it's not another one of those "he beats me because he loves me and he was a abused and he's hot so I'm totally ok with all the beating he gave me."
SandynettheElf chapter 20 . 10/1/2014
20 chapters of heaven. Why don't you update it's been approx. Five years since the last.
whisperypath chapter 20 . 9/26/2012
It's been so long since the last update...3 years ago...D:
I just want to say that i think this story and your writing skills are amazing, and though a little unlikely seeing how long it has been, if you ever have the interest or the time again, please come back to this story D: It is much loved :)
vipera.422 chapter 20 . 5/3/2012
Poor Nalin. Lucas is such an unbelievable jerk that I can't understand what Nalin sees in him. I mean, first he beats him up and now he expects him to just jump in bed with him? What an arrogant bastard!

I can't wait for the next chapter.
moon01234 chapter 20 . 11/25/2011
Sweet, sad and fantastic. Great job.
Rinny-Bird chapter 20 . 9/9/2011
Yeah I absolutely adore thus story and I so hope that you continue it even if its been two years since it was updated. The characters are wonderfully written and mist of there time I just want to give Nalin his absolutely needed hug. And, surprisingly, I adore Lucas even if he is jerk most of the time. Even the female characters are awesome which says something as females tend to be horribly written in these types if stories.

I'll stop my rambling now and just say that Id like you to continue as this is an amazing story.


PS, your writting style is beautiful as well.
bs49184 chapter 18 . 12/22/2010
i hpoe you made a sequel
paint-pops chapter 20 . 2/28/2010

I LOVE this story so much. I chouldn't stop reading at all.


It's so dramatic!

Will you continue this? I really, really hope so!

This story is absolutely fantastic!

letyoursoultakeflight chapter 16 . 11/14/2009
Love this chapter! So much lovely raw emotion!
Jester08 chapter 20 . 10/15/2009
Great story! Keep it up and update soon please! _
i-wish-i-had-wings chapter 20 . 9/29/2009
i never know what to write in these things..

well i love your story, it's one of the best i've ever read, so intense! i like how real it is
Kobashiftw chapter 20 . 9/23/2009
That was really cute. Kinda confused on some of the characters tho. but i expect it will be revealed later but that is wicked like most stories are pretty predicatable especially after the first couple of chapters and by chapter 5 the characters are madly in love and dating and most of there problems are soley external but that is so not with this story this one keeps me totally angstified (that really is a word its just that i'm the only one amazing enuf 2 no it(but if you update soon you can totally use it too(and yes i am trying to bribe you with the use of a completely made up word ;) (and for the record i think it is so cool that neither of the main characters are blond cause most stories has a dark haired bright eyed dude and a light haired guy with watever eyes( o and i really like parentheses if you cant tell)
freak4hitsugaya chapter 20 . 9/17/2009
wow nalin told lucas abut the scars? i'm surprised :P

And wow, tom likes emma? 0.0

I am really glad you updated, plz update soon!
Max-Ashworth chapter 20 . 9/16/2009
Grats on the reviews! (I am proud to be a serial-reviewer! You can't get rid of me, I am like the plague~.)

I was checking my e-mail and I was like, CRUELTY UPDATED AGAIN, SERIOUSLY? MY LIFE IS COMPLETE.

I love you.

I love this.

Every time Nalin gets hurt, my heart breaks a little bit. But it's the angst that feels good and makes you wanna hug things...I don't make sense, even to myself. Ignore me. :P
SabraChey chapter 20 . 9/16/2009
When when WHEN will they get togethuh?
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