Reviews for Cruelty |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I'm twitchy today. I'm twitchy all the time but today I am really twitchy. Like a hamster or a mouse or something. But it's not cute, just kind of creepy. (OKay picture this in your head, I am spinning around in circles as I type this) I love this story! (End the picture) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I REALY love this story! It's so original, I don't know what to do with myself! Lol. I came across it the other day and when I started reading it, I just couldn't put it down. I was getting tired of reading stories with the same thing over and over but with different characters. I'm glad ur writing this and I really hope u update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg! You finally update :P This chapter was great! Nalin is soo cute, i love him! i hope lucas really does kidnaps nalin for himself :P I hope you update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Boo Yah! 100th review! I love this story, but I don't think I've reviewed it before... The characters are so great and I love Nalin, he's so cute! I also love how Lucas has a dark past as well... and his father comes off as pretty realistic, which is often not the case with the "rich boy with distant parents" scenario. I read this story so fast because it was awesome, but now I don't remember anything... so I'll have to re-read it! So yeah, please keep updating because this story is awesome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just ate my veggie like a rabbit. It was amazing. I wish I could have shared that moment with someone. SIGH! I love this story. And stuff. I am in a blah mood right now. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So I'm SUPPOSED to be writing a poem for English class but I figured, hey my favourite story has updated...so I read this instead and reviewed it. :) Much better than a stupid poem based off another one anyway. No creativity there... Since Lucas' father is such a douchenozzle, may I kick him in the balls? :) Please? Twenty...wow. This is really going strong isn't it! Great job! I think at one point you wrote "Victoria" instead of "Emma"...when he was saying that his father approved of her. I was like...but Lucas doesn't even like Victoria...? Then I understood. I accept your excuses! :D For I understand completely. v.v ~AftG, Maggie |
![]() ![]() ![]() yay you updated! i wonder how much longer nalins going to be able to hold out against lucas :O my estimation: 2-3 more chapters? :P anyway good update, little on the short side but what can you do :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! I love it! I like Nalin very much! he is soo cute :) Update the next chapter soon! Please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Mm, do you look even a little bit like your mom? Kill her, take her passport, and go in her place. It's drastic, but it may just work. :P I LOVE the angst in this, omg~. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm glad Nalin's making Lucas work to get him. Haha how do you pronounce Nalin? Is it nay-lin? Or nah-lin? Anyway I absolutely love your story. Your characters are so real. :) -Karen |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahh you updated omg, it makes me wanna cry form pure bliss. Except the fact that you updated while I was in EUROPE and had no freaking access to a COMPUTER! Come on, what's your problem? xD The day you updated, I happened to be doing a homestay in France...luckily I got back on the 26th, meaning now I expect updates every second! Jk, don't worry. I'm not as demanding as Lucas lol. I'm just so happy you UPDATED! Oh god, I love this story so much, I think I might re-read it. After I catch up on all the other stories that updated when I was away for 3 weeks. . |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story so much. The chemistry between Nalin and Lucas is so... arg I can't describe it but it's good! Keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hello! Just so you know, I am fully hooked on this story you've been oh-so-excelently writing, so if you discontinue it, you will be my new public enemy #1. No pressure or anything, but if you don't continue, you will feel my wrath via review. So please, continue making both me and yourself happy and continue writing! Jinx |
![]() ![]() ![]() Don't worry, we'll love you no matter what tragedies befall you and your laptop. Wow Nalin grew a backbone! I'm so proud of him! But if all Lucas is proposing is a secret in-the-closet relationship...is that what Nalin really wants? is that what he needs? I don't know... poor sweetie :( Lucas needs to man up and face his responsibilities! He'd better deflate his ego a bit if he wants Nalin for his own. ;) Waiting ever patiently for the next update (July 25th *crosses fingers*) Oh and RIP laptop... :( luv and kisses and much fluff bunnies X) xoxoxox |
![]() ![]() ![]() I;m really really glad you decided to update this! If you feel out of touch with the story, I suggest reading over it again (possibly playing the same music you would when you wrote this out initially) then write out a sketch of the plot. That should help, I hope. Also, while I think that Emma’s been really helpful, I can’t help but want to kick her for being so nosy. As for the others, I’m glad something’s finally happeneing between Nalin and Lucas and I can’t wait to see what dear Lucas has planned in order to get what he wants, a.k.a. Nalin, but you knew that. Heh. |