Reviews for Cruelty
Sunshine Bear chapter 20 . 9/16/2009
I'm twitchy today. I'm twitchy all the time but today I am really twitchy. Like a hamster or a mouse or something. But it's not cute, just kind of creepy.

(OKay picture this in your head, I am spinning around in circles as I type this)

I love this story!

(End the picture)
d1sh3veledh34rt chapter 19 . 9/15/2009
I REALY love this story! It's so original, I don't know what to do with myself! Lol. I came across it the other day and when I started reading it, I just couldn't put it down. I was getting tired of reading stories with the same thing over and over but with different characters. I'm glad ur writing this and I really hope u update soon!
freak4hitsugaya chapter 19 . 9/15/2009
Omg! You finally update :P

This chapter was great! Nalin is soo cute, i love him! i hope lucas really does kidnaps nalin for himself :P

I hope you update soon!
Denfer chapter 19 . 9/13/2009
Boo Yah! 100th review! I love this story, but I don't think I've reviewed it before...

The characters are so great and I love Nalin, he's so cute! I also love how Lucas has a dark past as well... and his father comes off as pretty realistic, which is often not the case with the "rich boy with distant parents" scenario.

I read this story so fast because it was awesome, but now I don't remember anything... so I'll have to re-read it!

So yeah, please keep updating because this story is awesome!
Sunshine Bear chapter 19 . 9/13/2009
I just ate my veggie like a rabbit. It was amazing. I wish I could have shared that moment with someone.

SIGH!

I love this story.

And stuff. I am in a blah mood right now.
Max-Ashworth chapter 19 . 9/13/2009
So I'm SUPPOSED to be writing a poem for English class but I figured, hey my favourite story has updated...so I read this instead and reviewed it. :) Much better than a stupid poem based off another one anyway. No creativity there...

Since Lucas' father is such a douchenozzle, may I kick him in the balls? :) Please?

Twenty...wow. This is really going strong isn't it! Great job!

I think at one point you wrote "Victoria" instead of "Emma"...when he was saying that his father approved of her. I was like...but Lucas doesn't even like Victoria...? Then I understood.

I accept your excuses! :D For I understand completely. v.v

~AftG, Maggie
LimeSmoothie chapter 19 . 9/13/2009
yay you updated! i wonder how much longer nalins going to be able to hold out against lucas :O my estimation: 2-3 more chapters? :P

anyway good update, little on the short side but what can you do :)
freak4hitsugaya chapter 18 . 8/19/2009
Great story! I love it! I like Nalin very much! he is soo cute :)

Update the next chapter soon! Please!
Max-Ashworth chapter 18 . 8/13/2009
Mm, do you look even a little bit like your mom?

Kill her, take her passport, and go in her place.

It's drastic, but it may just work. :P

I LOVE the angst in this, omg~.
kawenchan chapter 18 . 8/13/2009
I'm glad Nalin's making Lucas work to get him. Haha how do you pronounce Nalin? Is it nay-lin? Or nah-lin? Anyway I absolutely love your story. Your characters are so real. :)

-Karen
Max-Ashworth chapter 17 . 7/28/2009
Ahh you updated omg, it makes me wanna cry form pure bliss.

Except the fact that you updated while I was in EUROPE and had no freaking access to a COMPUTER! Come on, what's your problem? xD The day you updated, I happened to be doing a homestay in France...luckily I got back on the 26th, meaning now I expect updates every second!

Jk, don't worry. I'm not as demanding as Lucas lol. I'm just so happy you UPDATED! Oh god, I love this story so much, I think I might re-read it. After I catch up on all the other stories that updated when I was away for 3 weeks. .
ChrisCHJ chapter 17 . 7/23/2009
I love this story so much. The chemistry between Nalin and Lucas is so... arg I can't describe it but it's good! Keep up the good work.
JillianJinx chapter 17 . 7/22/2009
Hello!

Just so you know, I am fully hooked on this story you've been oh-so-excelently writing, so if you discontinue it, you will be my new public enemy #1. No pressure or anything, but if you don't continue, you will feel my wrath via review. So please, continue making both me and yourself happy and continue writing!

Jinx
fynnagin chapter 17 . 7/19/2009
Don't worry, we'll love you no matter what tragedies befall you and your laptop.

Wow Nalin grew a backbone! I'm so proud of him! But if all Lucas is proposing is a secret in-the-closet relationship...is that what Nalin really wants? is that what he needs? I don't know... poor sweetie :( Lucas needs to man up and face his responsibilities! He'd better deflate his ego a bit if he wants Nalin for his own. ;)

Waiting ever patiently for the next update (July 25th *crosses fingers*)

Oh and RIP laptop... :(

luv and kisses and much fluff bunnies X) xoxoxox
runaway sheet chapter 17 . 7/19/2009
I;m really really glad you decided to update this!

If you feel out of touch with the story, I suggest reading over it again (possibly playing the same music you would when you wrote this out initially) then write out a sketch of the plot. That should help, I hope.

Also, while I think that Emma’s been really helpful, I can’t help but want to kick her for being so nosy. As for the others, I’m glad something’s finally happeneing between Nalin and Lucas and I can’t wait to see what dear Lucas has planned in order to get what he wants, a.k.a. Nalin, but you knew that. Heh.
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