Reviews for Cruelty
Sunshine Bear chapter 20 . 9/16/2009
I'm twitchy today. I'm twitchy all the time but today I am really twitchy. Like a hamster or a mouse or something. But it's not cute, just kind of creepy.

(OKay picture this in your head, I am spinning around in circles as I type this)

I love this story!

(End the picture)
d1sh3veledh34rt chapter 19 . 9/15/2009
I REALY love this story! It's so original, I don't know what to do with myself! Lol. I came across it the other day and when I started reading it, I just couldn't put it down. I was getting tired of reading stories with the same thing over and over but with different characters. I'm glad ur writing this and I really hope u update soon!
freak4hitsugaya chapter 19 . 9/15/2009
Omg! You finally update :P

This chapter was great! Nalin is soo cute, i love him! i hope lucas really does kidnaps nalin for himself :P

I hope you update soon!
Denfer chapter 19 . 9/13/2009
Boo Yah! 100th review! I love this story, but I don't think I've reviewed it before...

The characters are so great and I love Nalin, he's so cute! I also love how Lucas has a dark past as well... and his father comes off as pretty realistic, which is often not the case with the "rich boy with distant parents" scenario.

I read this story so fast because it was awesome, but now I don't remember anything... so I'll have to re-read it!

So yeah, please keep updating because this story is awesome!
Sunshine Bear chapter 19 . 9/13/2009
I just ate my veggie like a rabbit. It was amazing. I wish I could have shared that moment with someone.


I love this story.

And stuff. I am in a blah mood right now.
Max-Ashworth chapter 19 . 9/13/2009
So I'm SUPPOSED to be writing a poem for English class but I figured, hey my favourite story has I read this instead and reviewed it. :) Much better than a stupid poem based off another one anyway. No creativity there...

Since Lucas' father is such a douchenozzle, may I kick him in the balls? :) Please? This is really going strong isn't it! Great job!

I think at one point you wrote "Victoria" instead of "Emma"...when he was saying that his father approved of her. I was like...but Lucas doesn't even like Victoria...? Then I understood.

I accept your excuses! :D For I understand completely. v.v

~AftG, Maggie
LimeSmoothie chapter 19 . 9/13/2009
yay you updated! i wonder how much longer nalins going to be able to hold out against lucas :O my estimation: 2-3 more chapters? :P

anyway good update, little on the short side but what can you do :)
freak4hitsugaya chapter 18 . 8/19/2009
Great story! I love it! I like Nalin very much! he is soo cute :)

Update the next chapter soon! Please!
Max-Ashworth chapter 18 . 8/13/2009
Mm, do you look even a little bit like your mom?

Kill her, take her passport, and go in her place.

It's drastic, but it may just work. :P

I LOVE the angst in this, omg~.
kawenchan chapter 18 . 8/13/2009
I'm glad Nalin's making Lucas work to get him. Haha how do you pronounce Nalin? Is it nay-lin? Or nah-lin? Anyway I absolutely love your story. Your characters are so real. :)

Max-Ashworth chapter 17 . 7/28/2009
Ahh you updated omg, it makes me wanna cry form pure bliss.

Except the fact that you updated while I was in EUROPE and had no freaking access to a COMPUTER! Come on, what's your problem? xD The day you updated, I happened to be doing a homestay in France...luckily I got back on the 26th, meaning now I expect updates every second!

Jk, don't worry. I'm not as demanding as Lucas lol. I'm just so happy you UPDATED! Oh god, I love this story so much, I think I might re-read it. After I catch up on all the other stories that updated when I was away for 3 weeks. .
ChrisCHJ chapter 17 . 7/23/2009
I love this story so much. The chemistry between Nalin and Lucas is so... arg I can't describe it but it's good! Keep up the good work.
JillianJinx chapter 17 . 7/22/2009

Just so you know, I am fully hooked on this story you've been oh-so-excelently writing, so if you discontinue it, you will be my new public enemy #1. No pressure or anything, but if you don't continue, you will feel my wrath via review. So please, continue making both me and yourself happy and continue writing!

fynnagin chapter 17 . 7/19/2009
Don't worry, we'll love you no matter what tragedies befall you and your laptop.

Wow Nalin grew a backbone! I'm so proud of him! But if all Lucas is proposing is a secret in-the-closet that what Nalin really wants? is that what he needs? I don't know... poor sweetie :( Lucas needs to man up and face his responsibilities! He'd better deflate his ego a bit if he wants Nalin for his own. ;)

Waiting ever patiently for the next update (July 25th *crosses fingers*)

Oh and RIP laptop... :(

luv and kisses and much fluff bunnies X) xoxoxox
runaway sheet chapter 17 . 7/19/2009
I;m really really glad you decided to update this!

If you feel out of touch with the story, I suggest reading over it again (possibly playing the same music you would when you wrote this out initially) then write out a sketch of the plot. That should help, I hope.

Also, while I think that Emma’s been really helpful, I can’t help but want to kick her for being so nosy. As for the others, I’m glad something’s finally happeneing between Nalin and Lucas and I can’t wait to see what dear Lucas has planned in order to get what he wants, a.k.a. Nalin, but you knew that. Heh.
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