Reviews for Cruelty
aday4evr chapter 17 . 7/19/2009
Wow. This is REALLY good. I love the way you took everything slow. Usually when I read a story on here where the author tries to take things slow it seems rather forced and frankly, boring. But this is completely different it's actually incredibly natural. I can't wait to see what happens next.
CreativeChick233 chapter 17 . 7/19/2009
well at least you updated :] lol

I kinda like this chapter, even though I was slightly surprised. Just makes Lucas want Nalin even more :P.
Clazziquai Project chapter 17 . 7/19/2009
Wow, I just love this story so much. I'll be honest I totally had to re-read it to remember what all happened. I was starting to think you'd never update, so I forgot about it. hehe But I'm so glad you did! It's so unfortunate that some of the greatest stories online are left discontinued because of technical issues. Darn it! lol

Anyway on to the story, I absolutely love Nalin. I'm a total sucker for D/s stories. He's so adorable, and I don't mind that he's a total pansy (although he seems to be showing more of a backbone, eh?). I'd be a pansy too if I had to go through what he has. Such an unbelievably sad background. :(

Now Lucas... wow, what do I say about him? I like him, but I hate him. Possessiveness can be cute sometimes, but downright violence makes me cringe. When he beat Nalin up, I basically wanted to murder Lucas. lol Idk, it's a love/hate thing with Lucas. I'm sure he'll eventually do someting to redeem himself, right? hehe

Wonderful story; can't wait for updates. :)
CinderellaWithCombatBoots chapter 17 . 7/19/2009
I absolutely love the last few lines about how Nalin's secrets were written in the flesh from the beginning, it's really great. And I'm glad you're writing this again because it's a really good story so far. But I know how you're really frustrated with your laptop and files. It always happens to me, and my boyfriend keeps nagging me that I don't back any files up. He even bought me a USB stick thing but I just tell him I use it. I did try, but I always forget or get distracted and then forget, or I just can't be bothered, I'm lazy, I know, haha...but once my files are deleted, I never actually try and re-write them or anything, because they never end up like I wanted them to originally. I give up and move on with different things, but I'm glad you're continuing this. It's a good story.
Marrs chapter 17 . 7/19/2009
I was glad to see a new chapter to this story. I think it's really good
CinderellaWithCombatBoots chapter 16 . 6/23/2009
I frickin' LOVE this story. I give you the imaginary offering of green gummy bears (guess which ones I don't like haha) just kidding. I can have them if you want... But to be a mature adult about it...I love this story! Ah. My voice goes all high pitched and squeaky in my head at those words. I could be a opera singer or least in my head. In reality I can't sing for shit. But we'll put it aside for now at least to tell you that the story is really good and what's that with people not liking Emma? I like her. And you should know I'm the only one who really matters :P But I think she's awesome. I love your characters, just minus Tom, Victoria, Doug and...other annoying people. They rather take the meaning out of life whilst giving it some...if that made any sense. But don't worry, I'm not 100% weird ALL the time...just 99.9%. For a small percentage to be taken away, it's actually a big difference. In my life at least. But I will leave you to your writing and life and everything. Awesome story.

P.S. Obama rules ;P
flawedxuni chapter 16 . 4/19/2009
Where's the rest? I want more! lol. No seriously, I really do love this story, and I was sad when I got to the last chapter you have up - only to find out that it's also a cliffhanger :( I'm also a bit surprised by the number of reviews you have. I honestly think you should have WAY more, that's how great your story is.

I absolutely love Nalin. He's so cute, and I feel soo bad for him - with the scars, and his father. Also the fact that he has to endure a lot of awful crap from Lucas, and the rest of the students. I just hope Lucas ends up being more human (which it seems like he's on the way toward).

Hmm... Lucas's character is an interesting one. I can't say I hate him, but I do not like him as much as I'd like to (since he is one of the main characters). I think what really made me angry at him was the fact that he beat up Nalin. That was just way too extreme. And then there's the fact that he makes fun of him with his friends (which is wrong). I think the only way I'd really grow to like Lucas, is if he does something seriously good for Nalin (above and beyond!) Because, Nalin deserves that. And if Lucas is going to start being nicier and become closer to Nalin, I think he needs to do something to redeem himself.

Other than that, I do really love your story. It for some strange reason (don't ask why, cuz I don't know), reminds me of harry potter. I know it's nothing like it, I just think of it while I'm reading your story. It's weird, but heh, can't help it. lol. Anyway, I seriously hope you don't give this story up. And I really hope you update soon (like tomorrow? lol)

-eVil uNicorns-
Anitiluj chapter 16 . 4/17/2009
I'd just like to say that I love the pace of this story. Slowly developed slash is wonderful, and this story is very well written.

Though Nalin is a wimp. An adorable one, but nevertheless, a wimp. However, I do like the fact that you've developed his character by explaining his wimpiness and I look forward to explanations regarding Lucas' past. Though in my opinion, he should spend a little more time feeling guilty about beating up Nalin. Just an opinion though. :)
MAGICAL.NARRATOR chapter 16 . 3/19/2009
amazing story...

I LOVE Nalin!

I'm sure I'll start liking Lucas too... once he's finally honest with Nalin.

please update soon.
i-see-faeries chapter 16 . 2/13/2009
Aw, it's finally going somewhere! I love this. Super cute. I love both Nalin and Lucas, I honestly. They're both adorable in their own ways. Much love! Update soon!
Subbie chapter 10 . 2/6/2009
AW THIS SOUNDS EPIC... Oh and you are my idol; you can write in roman numerals

Subbie chapter 1 . 2/5/2009

andee lee chapter 16 . 1/26/2009
I DO love this chapter more than your reviewers! Obviously. Because they are not mine. But ANYWAYS.

I feel like this weight is lifted off of my shoulders now that Nalin knows. HAHA. Is that weird? I can just see things starting to develop and maybe, just MAYBE, things will start getting a little easier for him? Probably not. Poor kid is like a magnet for mean people, but hey!

I loved the awkwardness of them in the bathrom. It was fun! :-)

You know I can't wait for the next chapter! Also thanks for clearing up the Emma bit... I thought she told Nalin only because she wanted to get back at Lucas. I still like her though. She's funny and kind of random. She's one of those characters that kind of make the story, I think. But of course Lucas and Nalin are still my #1s! hehe.

-Andee :-)
runaway sheet chapter 16 . 1/25/2009
Yeah, you better love us more than this chappie.

Finally! I thought this wasn't going to happen any time soon. Lucas is takin' charge! Yeah *pumps fist in air*

Take a walk, take a walk. in the dark o.O

I thought Emma mentioned that Nalin might like him back when she was getting Lucas to reveal his gayness. haha-haha. Yeah, actually I figured that the she-psychologist planned to fix things, and it's a great way to force them to confront each other. I still think she had no right to tell Nalin though. I guess I have mixed feelings for that she-psychologist.

Too bad 'bout your driver's ed, but hurrah for your fans!

Keep updating!
Cattails chapter 16 . 1/25/2009
I really liked this chapter :D The drama! And the hugging! That bit in the showers was incredibly cute. Although I fear for Emma. She should maybe consider hiding in another country for awhile. Maybe. So, now that things are out in the open, I wonder what they're going to do? Hm...
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