Reviews for Cruelty
teethandlungs chapter 16 . 1/25/2009
D perfection.
JtheChosen1 chapter 16 . 1/25/2009
very good work! Lucas is such a basket case, but he's still workable!
Max-Ashworth chapter 16 . 1/25/2009
lol I had just finished catching up reading 5 chapters from another story, went back to check me e-mail and saw that 20 minutes ago this chapter was uploaded. And I spun around in my chair going "YAYY!" for about 3 seconds before I read it. I'm such a freak. xD Oh jeez...

I love this chapter, it makes me want to squeal happy fangirl squeals. w Is it weird If I say I love you? xD Because this story is amazing.

Drtiver's ed...I don't thikn I'll take driver's ed. I'm terrified of driving anyway, maybe my mom will just teach me. I don't know. My 16th birthday is in June so I'm not even going to worry about it until then. I'm glad you'll have more time though, for my own selfish reasons! ;D

I've always liked Emma...;)
FamousOneLiners chapter 15 . 1/23/2009
runaway sheet chapter 15 . 1/22/2009
I absolutely loved the half-coming out scene. I find Emma just a tad bit annoying though. She's always nosing in other people's business. She's smart though. A possible shrink?

I don't like how they're avoiding each other. Stupid guys - just admit your feelings and make up already. Psshh! Advance story, advance!

Yeah, I pretty much watched the inauguration on CNN at work along with half the staff. I thought it was well delivered too, but let's not get into politics here.

Yes, you have been keeping us away from any action. To make up for it, I personally give you a punishment of writing twice as long a chapter in the SAME amonut of time! Hahahaha, K, fine. I know I'm not a regular reviewer so you won't really care what I say, but in my defense, I only started this story yesterday and finished it today! Lovely!

Okay... update soon and I will send you a cyber version of the exact chocolate cake that Lucas and Nalin SHARED! Yes, such a long time ago. Ha, I kid. It's fine to take it slow, but you gotta make chapters extra long then. We be a bunch of hormaonal reviewers who want things to ADVANCE! Will It be less harsh if I proclaim to love you now? Hahaha.
runaway sheet chapter 14 . 1/22/2009
Lovely lovely story, this one.

I don't think you over-used the word prank. Not to me anyway.

I believe that there is a certain time that the stuff stays in your computer history for. I also think you can delete your cookies and then poof! its gone. Not too sure 'bout that though.

Naw, I like Lucas! I like Nalin's name, and Nalin too, of course. I love Lucas more though. Hehehehehehe-hhehehehe... hehehe... heheh ehe, K, All done now. I shall read the last updated chapter now. Keep updating! That's right, work your lazy a** off. I can't write the actual word out. I tried once and fictionpress censored it anyway.
Sunshine Bear chapter 15 . 1/21/2009
My eyes burn and it feels like I haven't blinked when reading this beautiful story.

I have, it feels like I haven't though..

Anyhow. I love it.

I approve.
Cattails chapter 15 . 1/21/2009
Lucas is making progress! I think! Yay! :D But now he's gotta get on Nalin's good side... I think this is going to take a bit of work O.o Ah, Emma will help.
Max-Ashworth chapter 15 . 1/21/2009
I tried commented last night but they said I couldn't because their system was frakked up! :O

GOBAMA! xD My school is cool; during lunch the principal announced that teachers should turn on their TVs so that students could watch the inauguration if they wanted to. I loved Obama's speech. It was so amazing. (I use the word amazing too much.)

Good gods. THESE BOYS! *tears hair out* They're so damaged but it makes me dance in my seat when I read this story. I honestly don't think I'd be able to stop reading, even if there wasn't action for 40 chapters. Readers who only want action are BAD CHIL'UNS! (Hehe. I like saying "childrens" like that, although it's not a word...)
andee lee chapter 15 . 1/21/2009
Woo woo, OBAMA!

Ok, lol. I'm somewhat obsessed with him. In a non-creepy way of course. Only it's totally creepy. But I agree, his speech WAS amazing and I'm looking forward to what he's going to do in office.

and you are probably like, uh, okay? like this matters? WHERE IS MY REVIEW? so i will shut up and get on with it...

YES! YES! WE NEED MORE ACTION! LOTS OF IT! lol. :-) Really though Nalin and Lucas can't be like one of those random hook-ups or anything because of the way they are, so it's kind of expected to be slow. But ... a little bit of lovin' never hurt nobody! :-D

Great chapter! I love Emma...she's so blunt and out there. And Lucas is so grumpy but I still have a little spot in my heart especially for him. hehe. Can't wait for the next one!

-Andee :-)
JtheChosen1 chapter 15 . 1/20/2009
yay for hating Lucas!

and it was cool with u bringing in ur political views, since u were pretty much non-biased on 'em. i went with McCain,same reason as u, but i have no quarrel with Obama.

great chapter, and I didn;t want to say anythign about there being no action for fear of inciting your wrath! :P
kiki19857 chapter 15 . 1/20/2009
i don't mind. i can see how their relationship evolute over time. However, you have yet to explore both of their dark pasts.
JadesyWadesy chapter 14 . 1/19/2009
I love this story! Lucas and Nalin are amazingly well depicted :D I can't wait for more!

I actually really like Lucas, just as much as I like Nalin :D Great story! I love it!

Until then,

Cattails chapter 14 . 1/19/2009
Go, Emma! Solving everyone's problems I loved that bit with making Lucas jealous... Aw, I feel sorry for him. Maybe he is secretly a sweetie. He's lucky Emma's around O.o
andee lee chapter 14 . 1/19/2009
Ha ha, the secret's out!

I for one don't hate Lucas. I like him in that "I'm emotionally damaged and so I will take it out on others" sort of way. LOL. I just want him to wake up and smell the roses, dammit!

I hope you post Ch 15 today since I'm stuck at work - it's terrible, I work for the City! Why the hell do I have to work on a national holiday? And okay I'm done with my pointless rambling...

As for the whole Emma thing, I think that it was pretty realistic. I'm not sure that she could have gone all the way back to his freshman year in the history, though. But who knows! Technology these days. All those young whipper snappers... haha...

Okay wow. This is the lamest review ever but what the hell, I'm not done yet.

As for other words for prank (even though it didn't really bother me) Maybe you could try trick or practical joke or stunt... something along those lines. But like I said, I didn't really notice it.

So yeah! I'm glad to see Lucas' human side, like you said. I dont think we'll be hating him forever, will we? haha.

-Andee :-)
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