This was a great chapter! I think Nalin's confusion is cute; Victoria is one of the few people to actually like him, but he isn't sure he's interested...Poor boy! This whole story is great, it's fun to read and very well written. I agree with your 'that's gay' comment; so many people just say it not even thiunking about what they are actually saying! It's one of my pet epves too. Anyway, keep up the great work, I'm looking forward to plenty more!

This story is really really good ! Can't wait for the next update :)

Ahh, yay, another great chapter! Looking forward to the rest! Love ya and your story!

Ash

Alright, so here's the deal. I LOVE this story. I don't know what it is, but I love it so much I can't even explain it. I absolutely adore this story and I need another update for fear of widthdrawal and/or death.

I really like Lucas. Despite the fact that he poured glue on Nalin's head, and despite the fact that he beat Nalin up, and despite the fact that he's pretty much always a jerk to Nalin, I still like him. I know he's probably got some strange mental condition and/or an effed up past, so I can forgive his faults.

And also, the line, "'Go away, you're irritating me,'" in chapter six is absolutely hilarious to me. I don't know why it's so funny, but it is. :]

Great chapter, nice change of scenery, and good job with characterization!

naaww, poor nalin ;_;

hey, what happened to his haircut btw? you know, when it was being cut weirdly.

anyways, awesome story, can't wait to see how it develops x)

aww poor boy

lucas is just so mean!

Ahh, the tension between them is KILLING ME! It's so crazy.

The end of this chapter made my heart speed up and I was all on the edge of my seat like ... "GAH!"

It's so sad. And so many other things all at once. I don't know. anyways.

YAY. Can't wait for the next one!

- Andee :-)

PS - YOU MUST GO SEE TWILIGHT. IT'S FABULOUS! lol. I hope you get a chance to soon!

aw

poor boys, great chapter though!

jeez man. im barely on fictionpress anymore, but i am so happy i stumbled upon this story. it's so much angsty cute slashy boy fun. It's adorable and keep updating as quickly as you do!

Aw. Poor Nalin. I feel so bad for him.

I like it a lot. nalin is so cute and lucas is a bastard!

Beautiful - I'm hooked. can't wait till sunday ;)

Wow. There's a side of Lucas that we've never seen before. Well...not really, anyway. I'm starting to like him even more.

I think it's cool the way he opened up to Nalin.

And I also think it's cool that Nalin wants to be a writer because writers are freakin awesome. :-)

I'm glad they sort of talked. I can't wait to see what happens next. :-)

And you should tell your parents that you want to write, dammit! Screw being a doctor. That stuff is for sissies. Real badasses write romance stories!

LOL!

Great chapter.

-Andee