Reviews for Cruelty
Spinning Jenny chapter 6 . 11/9/2008
Dude... what is Lucas's problem? Ha ah ha. Yeah, yeah, I know. We'll find out eventually.

Lyra Waterflame chapter 6 . 11/9/2008
O! That. Was. An. Awesome. Chapter! Please write more soon!
firestar267 chapter 6 . 11/9/2008
once again, this was really good. lucas is so interesting...
teethandlungs chapter 6 . 11/8/2008
I'm glad Nalin didn't give into him. :)
CharismaticOutCry chapter 6 . 11/8/2008
Oh oh!


How scandalous!

Drunk... The people are always drunk man. Why does everyone have to get drunk? Alcohol man... It's not good.

Poor Victoria and her being scared by the scary Lucas monster! And Lucas being all big-headed, and damn straight Nalin should push him away! He bruised him! That's not nice!

Can't wait for the next chapter!

teethandlungs chapter 5 . 11/6/2008
I really like this so far. I'm wondering what could possibly be a good enough excuse for Lucas to do that to Nalin, so I'm curious about that. Can't wait for chapter six!
ConfigurationSpace chapter 5 . 11/3/2008
I've really enjoyed this story so far, and I can't wait to see where you take it! I love the depth that your characters have, and I love that you show what happens instead of just telling it. I'll definitely be looking for updates. :)
Spinning Jenny chapter 5 . 11/3/2008
Don't mind me while I send daggers and death glares at Lucas...

Update soon.
Spinning Jenny chapter 2 . 11/3/2008
_ I guess the hate is on! Yes!
Spinning Jenny chapter 1 . 11/3/2008
*fangirl squeal*

Oh, how I adore Nalin. I wish I could give him a bear hug. .

As to what I think of the story? Awesome, my friend, awesome. Update soon!
Lyra Waterflame chapter 5 . 11/3/2008
PLEASE write more SOON? Please? Nalin is fascinating... I can't wait to read more!
firestar267 chapter 5 . 11/3/2008
Aww I really like this. I like the flashbacks and i really want to hear more of Lucas's background. keep it up i cant wait for more!
CharismaticOutCry chapter 5 . 11/3/2008
This is pretty cool.

I'm liking it so far.

Did you post all five of these chapters in one hit?

I like the name Nalin. And I want to know more about his past and Lucas' past... And why the hell Lucus beating Nalin up is so shocking... I mean, I'm seeing how he could, I'm a little stuck on how Nalin brought it down upon himself though. Lol.

Oh! Grandparents, good to know that they care! Where'd his parents go though? Nice to see that no good father of his go... Bastard, with his whips... And his anger... Is he in gaol? Where's his mother?

And I know what you'll say; All in good time dear reader!

I will stay tuned!

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