|Reviews for Time to leave|
| english summer rain chapter 1 . 11/8/2008
second last stanza: 'she looks at me and/asks' :)
i love your style of poetry, it's so broken and beautiful. the last stanza is bloody amazing.
| Isca chapter 1 . 11/3/2008
"Yesterday, she watched over the world." Absolutely beautiful opening line! :)
I loved the tragic tone of this poem!
OH MY GOD: "She looks at me and asks, 'Who is the girl they took away?'" That part was brilliant; sad, but brilliant! :D
This entire piece was amazing, and shows that your writing is maturing with grace.
Well Done! :D