Reviews for Manipulation
Sexy Vampirechick chapter 1 . 2/13/2009
I liked this piece a lot, though it's short. I like how it's straight to the point. The begining was nice,I liked how it stated "I must confess", and letting the person know about its evil doing,though that was really mean.
Chasing Skylines chapter 1 . 12/27/2008
Haha, good ending twist there.

The format was a bit odd, but you made it work, and no glaring grammatical errors, so that's a plus.

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Isca chapter 1 . 11/3/2008
Wow. That was really blunt and honest, and I liked that about it.
dragonflydreamer chapter 1 . 11/3/2008
I liked the end; nice twist.

I also like the punctuation. It's a but random, like a train of thought, but still grammatically correct.

Nice work :)