Reviews for Breathe
Zoe Marhassa chapter 1 . 5/22/2009
The beginning could use more details and description. You just put her running home, but you didn't really describe her setting. This first chapter was good, though.
three.little.words chapter 1 . 4/4/2009
Is there more? If there is, i'd love to read the rest :)
SecretSymphony chapter 1 . 1/22/2009
Hey,

great story

I like mysterious men with pretty eyes...

i bet he's a prince or some rich noble

You know, I'm writing a story about Egypt as well and i was just about to call one of my characters Amisi but now i'll have to find another one..

damn you... :P

just out of interest what time period is this set in

i know it's in ancient egypt but like what year/kingdom

update soon!
BS2007 chapter 1 . 12/11/2008
Good story, can't wait to read more!
Godsmusician93 chapter 1 . 11/3/2008
Wonderful story! the ending was so unexpected. Great job!
katelynn63 chapter 1 . 11/3/2008
this is amazing,

you've gotta add more as soon as possible!

i hope you have more stories up, cause i'm about to go read them :D
Smartass Joker chapter 1 . 11/3/2008
I really like it! Now you just need to update, like ASAP!

Joker
Lollisalol chapter 1 . 11/3/2008
I really like the plot! Well-written!
Nyleve Nalloc chapter 1 . 11/3/2008
Egypt! Oh that alone would've made me stick around. I'm curious, so, I will be waiting!